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@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: -Mitra
Ah! a good observation, Hamini.
As you already know, they are all larger than life characters and they have to be the best in what they do. Unfortunately, they are all from non-engineering background and I cannot have them graduate from IIT :)

You are still on the PM list to my knowledge. 😉

Oh please! let them from foreign universities...thats more charming...But I dont mind JNU or DU...the guys there are better than the ones from IIT...

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Ah! that is indeed what I wanted to showcase through the updates and you caught it right on. Glad we are on the same page.

She bought Aditya a gift too. Singing canaries...Looks like Arjun has really spurned her - pushed her away, while Aditya did just the opposite.

But it is human nature to want the unattainable ... 😆

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@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Oh my god! Arnav really has got it bad...he is blasting his team...he hasnt seen her quote/note...And now Vishwa has taken charge of the situation...Oh man! I loved the "Dhri puttar" ..could really hear Vishwa calling him that!! Their interaction was awesome,...reminded me of two close buddies ready to make a move for mischief...aha! I want to read again at leisure and at peace and will address all the minor points I missed...

Oh btw, the 19th update really reminded me of a story which I had began but stopped writing...Sigh! Have you thought how would Shyama feel when she comes to know of her daddy darling's plans and manipulations?? It always hurt a daughter to know that she was/is a bait in the family business...or she was/is a pawn in their business politics...

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@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: Kishmish

But it is human nature to want the unattainable ... 😆

Its agreeable in Adi's case..but why did Arjun had to push her away?? as Hasini as mentioned as Arjun's thought - he took her in her arms only to push her away...why take her in the arms in the first place if you weren't ready?? He behaved in a conflicted way...I am not taking sides with Adi..but Adi is accomplished and confident of what he can provide and he is sure of what he desires...where as Arjun is having lot of issues and other priorities in head and life hence he can't go for what he desires or wishes...so he is fighting his desires but certain times,you really can't fight destiny...I am waiting to see how Vishwa will lure Arjun to Baldrachalam!! can't wait...

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

A song for Shyama ... sorry Hasini tried to post the link the way you suggested but ... 😳

http://youtu.be/lf6F6gfh2Hs

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: dreamymaya
he took her in her arms only to push her away...why take her in the arms in the first place if you weren't ready?? He behaved in a conflicted way...

Though he is in a conflict, his message to her wasn't. Read the sentence again.

he went against every voice in his head to keep her in his life and taken her into his arms to push her away.

He knew well what it meant to take a woman like Shyama into his arms. Its the reason why he did what he did.

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Kishmish, Post the below line without the gap between the tags.

[YOUTUBE] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lf6F6gfh2Hs [/YOUTUBE]

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Ah! that is indeed what I wanted to showcase through the updates and you caught it right on. Glad we are on the same page.

She bought Aditya a gift too. Singing canaries...Looks like Arjun has really spurned her - pushed her away, while Aditya did just the opposite.

Why do I feel like she bought Adi a gift and left a very professional note and delivered it in a very professional style ---to say that she is regretfully declining the offer...but there wasn't an apology in that...if there was, then she would have mentioned the latter words "a friend for the silence inside" in that note, not the professional way of "singing canaries for silence outside".It wasn't the same kind of the apology note that she left for Arjun...When Shyama's wrote an apology to Arnav, she did it with style where she didn't bend her self esteem or dignity or pride or ego..but she made sure that it was in a heartfelt sincere apology without compromising her personality...a silent tenderness was there...where as for Adi, she felt a tenderness wen she saw his room, when she wrote the latter note but she curbed that...why? now that only she could tell..am waiting for her perspective...

Arjun might have deflected her interest in his life by showcasing his issues or hardships..he didn't want her to have any illusions...in one way he didn't allow her to probe deeply into his life like she did with Adi..Arjun just made her feel that she was given access to his pensive but he restricted her entry to just the periphery of his pensive...he didn't allow her to the core..where as Adi gave her complete access to the core as well as periphery and Shyama prefers the periphery in Adi's case, the declined to work in the core...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Love your analysis, Amaya, but can't answer it now. :(

Wait for the trip to start.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: -Mitra
Love your analysis, Amaya, but can't answer it now. :(
Wait for the trip to start.

:-) No issues! will the trip start tonight? Shall I too pack my bags??😉

I will have more questions and comments...this is coming just from my first reading...I need to read in pleasure..as Kishmish and mklam mentioned your story can't be done just with one read, it has to be read again and again...to cherish the feel of characters, to understand the plots being designed, the way the game are scheduled and various strategies of plays been decided up on and as the fate begins the game, using the presence of mind, each player has to keep changing the strategies and go for powerplay...Aha!! I appreciate you for taking this background...its not a easy platform when lot of comparisons to the epic can be done, you have to done a brilliant job so far and I am sure you as you go forward, it would be more fantastic and brilliant which would hook more readers and make them sit at the edge of their seats, biting their nails wondering who will and when will the goal happen...You present the story in an intoxicating game style...there is so much blood pressure raising moments...I have never been attracted to a story like this before...(Ok. Harry potter was an exception)