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-Mitra thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun


H, Arjun told Shyama about 2 of his twin cousins who visit them often... He could have just told her that they were 5 brothers if he knew that they were his step brothers, right?

Anyways, now mommy dear just mentioned that Arjun was only 10 when they came home, and did not even know they were his step brothers. That does not clearly state that he knows this fact now...

I think hence the confusion :)


Thank you for clarifying. I'm forgetting what's been narrated in the previous chapters - Uff! I'm getting old.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymaya

OK. I read the last 3 updates in a go..well, I was wondering when will the dialogue of sharing will come up and how will you play that part. It did come up but was not carried forward. I mean in the current world, marrying 5 people is out of question. But then that was an important part in the history. However, the topic came up later between the ladies but was not relevantly spoken about. Anyways with that eavesdropping Kushi got an insight into his family about the twins being his step brothers and not cousins..

Btw, how did Dhri and VIshwa reach his place so soon? Is there a significance behind Shyama being hurt? Arnav's concern was beautifully scripted. I was wondering where did Dhri go that time. The blast occurred while Dhri and Vishwa was also present. Dhri's concern was late, (only when the Telgu bit came) and
Do you send PM or mail alerts when updating the story? if so please let me know..


You have to wait for just two more updates - Chapter 16 is from Vishwa's perspective.
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Posted: 11 years ago

I finally caught up with the story Mitra - what should i say?, fabulous, brilliant, amazing, mind blowing and what not? The epic is always interesting as it has different shades to it depending on from whose point of view you look at it - you stumped me by the revelation of step brothers (Nivedh and Sahasra) and how good you have adopted the story to modern times, can anyone actually do this? - i guess its impossible. The writing style is different, and every dialogue has more than one meaning (refering to the epic and also in accordance with current context of the story) and writing almost all the dialogues like that is incredibly difficut, that much i can say. Seriously, i don't know how to tell what i am feeling after catching up wih the story so far, i am definitely looking forward to read more!

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Posted: 11 years ago

"Ma look what bhaiya has got tonight?" someone shouted.

"Just share it amongst yourselves without breaking it," the response came back.

"You two clear out," his voice was stern ... though the mother asked them to share

whatever Arjun had got but he very firmly laid his claim on her !!! šŸ˜†


What a great lady Khyati has turned out to be ... the sacrifices that she made in taking

care of another woman's children as her own ... over that feeling miserable that she could

not take care of her husband while he was alive ...

I wonder what the significance of Shyama overhearing this conversation could be ...

will it make it easier for her to adjust to his family ...

Waiting for the next update ... pretty please 😳

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Something I have been mum about for a while, but I doubt I can hold it in any longer.
How have so many of you accepted these characters as Arjun and Shyama? And not as Arnav and Kushi?

Is it because the story is an adaptation of the epic? I thought there were some ardent fans in this forum, that I would be forced to shut this thread down and start it elsewhere. Well, at least that is what I had assumed the day I posted the banner and dared to state that it is the story of Arjun and Shyama.

I'm glad that its working for most of you, even if not for everyone.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Something I have been mum about for a while, but I doubt I can hold it in any longer.

How have so many of you accepted these characters as Arjun and Shyama? And not as Arnav and Kushi?

Is it because the story is an adaptation of the epic? I thought there were some ardent fans in this forum, that I would be forced to shut this thread down and start it elsewhere. Well, at least that is what I had assumed the day I posted the banner and dared to state that it is the story of Arjun and Shyama.

I'm glad that its working for most of you, even if not for everyone.


I imagine them as Arjun and Shyama ... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kishmish

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I wonder what the significance of Shyama overhearing this conversation could be ...


Why do you think its her husband? Question: Have you read mahabharata before?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra


Why do you think its her husband? Question: Have you read mahabharata before?


Oh ... is she thinking of Karna ?
Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 10 - wow...lovley part...loved the talk they shares...she now knows lots of things about him...I loved the idea of shyama staying at arjun's place...indeed it will help to progress their binding...
I loved the name Hastin Point (as in Hastinapur) and the case was going against its possession...seems it was dearest place for him...
Brats - nivesh & sahsra (as in Nakul & Sahdev) ...loved his family backgound and how he loved his family...
Waiting for her to enter his house and his mother welcoming her
Loved the pics of Hastin Point...all are beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11 - so vishwas word turned true...blue flames...arjun is the only one who can handle her...

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