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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Tu Kahan Yeh Bata ... Is Nashili Raat Mein ... 😳

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgezoiBPgWI

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 12 - loved the caring & attention reced from his mother & family...all were ready to help them

i was scared when his mother said to share without breaking but glad that nothing happened like that...

oh..shyama is so string...in her illness also she was thinking wisely...

omg...arnav's feelings & concern & running to do ernads for her was nice...

why vishwa was so silent...or he just letting the things go on their way as it was good for arjun-shyama

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 13 - so nivedh & sahastra are his step borthers from madhvi (as in madri) and it was theri secret but now arjun knows about this and even shyama also...loved the talk bet two ladies...will it help shyama in future...

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Vee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Chapter 5:

There is a certain need that charges the air between Shyama and Vishwa. But then, isn't need just wanting to the point of pain? I wonder if this is the end between Shyama and Vishwa, or is it just the beginning. And how will Arjun take all this?

I really need to start reading the Mahabharata.

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Vee

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 6&7:

What is reality?

The entire story is being narrated in first person, which means we are not being given facts, but a perception of the fact. Therefore, we cannot bank on the version of events being presented to us. My question is, the singular defining moment between Shyama and Arjun, was it felt by both, or just by her?

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Deepavali subhkankshalu :-) :-) meeku mariyu Mee kutumba sabhyulaku :-)

I need to catch up all the updates!!!

Sorry for the delay .

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Wish you dear writer and all the readers

A Very Happy and Prosperous Diwali ...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Happy Diwali to all of you. And thanks! to those who sent me wishes.

I have been away from writing for a bit, but will pick it up today and post 1-3 chapters depending on how my day turns out. So, hang in there...

-H

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vfordonkey
Chapter 6&7:

What is reality?

The entire story is being narrated in first person, which means we are not being given facts, but a perception of the fact. Therefore, we cannot bank on the version of events being presented to us. My question is, the singular defining moment between Shyama and Arjun, was it felt by both, or just by her?

Right on. And even from his end, there is only perception...

I doubt I can write about reality unless, the narrative is third person omniscient.