Arhi FF: Labyrinth - Thread 2 Link posted - Page 4

Chapter 1

Khushi is a strong, independent and intelligent woman, I have a strong feeling when the time comes she would be the one who wields power and influence. It is obvious she is the life of this story and it because of and for women wars are fought. We see the preparation for something important here, the signs are there.

I love the name Shyama as much as Krishna for a girl, suits your Khushi.

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

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To a great extent, The Mahabharata defines our thinking and the importance of that literary work is seen in all walks of life. My first memory of the epic is my Grandmother reading the Bhagvad Gita daily, sitting with her in our puja room hearing her read. They were words then but through the years, I tried understanding those words and am still working on it. That is the potency of this epic and you are writing a story taking that as inspiration, it can only be interesting and captivating.

An auspicious beginning, Vyasa Maharishi requests Ganesha to be the scribe for the story and like them; I hope the readers involve themselves in this story to discuss the ideas, actions and motives of the characters of the story.

I hope reading this story would be an enlightening journey for me, I wish you luck for this attempt.

Vakratunda mahakaya, Surya koti samah prabah.

Nirvighnam kurume Deva, Sarve karyeshu sarvada.

(To Ganesha: O Lord, you with the curved trunk and of a large body, resplendent like a thousand suns, I request your grace in accomplishing all my tasks, without any obstacles, always)

Chapter 2

Am I allowed to say, I am falling in love with Vishwa? He is charming and untouchable, seeing him through Khushi's eyes makes me want to know more about him and the way he influences Khushi.

We get to know more about Khushi and her life. It is always interesting to read, how the protagonists meet; this was as dramatic and yet as subtle as they come. She and we are left wondering how the two would meet again, taken' you say and I agree.