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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

loved this update...I was waiting for their little conversation..May be I have predicted that...But their 1st journey together left me little baffled..They have to walk through an uneven path..As I am predicting..their journey will eventful, Now I wana see whether that will full of sorrows with glimpses of Khushi (happiness) or vice versa.. Kudos for this update..

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

😃 ...

Loved this verbal volley between them ...

she has her answers ready ...

Life's going to be pretty interesting for them 😉

By standing in front of her he made her realise that he would always be

there to protect her ... through all the ups and downs of life ...

Loved the subtle mention of his past ... someone who he was friendly with

once but has moved on in life ... whom he was fond of enough to remember her ...

looking forward to the next phase of the train ride ...

Thanks -Mitra ... sorry for posting the comment so late ... 😳

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

A volley indeed. And I enjoyed it immensely :) He comes at par, she corrects him to Shyama :)

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Really liked the verbal exchanges between them. So his first love is Subha and who is married now?. Also loved the way they both are correcting their names. I noticed that your display name is changed from Lahari? Any reason?

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

No reason at all, the seasons seems to have changed and along with it my preferences ;)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

oh ma it seems they are getting cosy
well kinda
and sharing things too
but is that intentional or not one doesnt know
this trian journey is gonna build towards their relationship for sure

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321abc

@321abc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Part 7 & 8 are awesome as well! I like how you described khushis experience with local life as she has been surrounded by luxury only. Khushi and Arnav's interaction is interesting to read as she is remaining mysterious with secrets and Arnav is trying be friends with her. I can't wait to read more on how this relationship is going to progress, please update soon

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

The ongoing train journey seems to be going well with them...both seems to very smitten by each other's comments...

When Khushi entered the train...she was just awestruck...she being use to the lap of luxury...observed...what a life of a local could be...but what I really loved is...how she just got herself so accustomed to a conversation...oblivious to her surroundings...and top that Arnav...is making her change trains...to finally get home!

Waiting eagerly for the next update...