|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series (link to thread 2 added) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Nice concept
it sounds lyk PUNAR VIVAH-ZMD! is it inspired by that show??

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
awsmo update soon and long 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
finally i like both the sisters talk nicely... wow finally she receive a call from him
to meet him for a coffee and finally they both are about to get remarried...
and i think both will tell the truth to each other about their past...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Sorry 4 late comment...
It was nice part...
It depicted their P.O.V.
Kriya's mom is aso ri8 at her place she is worried 4 her daughter...
Rey and kriya's feelings for their life partner are true...
But once dey get married dey will fall in love...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Em Loving It

Awesome

Amazing

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Fab

Splendid

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice piece of write-up. Honestly i dont gain interest in such stories but sumwhere i m feeling connected to this one. Wud luv to read further.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
This story going really great...
Very interesting one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
oye is baar 1st res I want
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
nyc concept...
intersting one...
loved it...
thnx fr d pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Here's the second part.



Part 2:



She looked at her parents in confusion and spoke "mom, dad I need to talk to you now."

Her parents looked at the guests with an apologetic look.

"No problem smriti, you go we'll wait here" Preeti, rey's mom said. Once Kriya and her parents left, Kaira spoke "daddy I'm hungry."

"Kaira baby you can have these snacks" Sharon said offering her a few snacks.

"Thank you."

"She's really sweet and polite." Sharon complimented Kaira to which Rey and his parents smiled.

On the other hand, Kriya and her parents were in a room.

"Kriya is this the way you behave in front of guests. We could have talked later." Smriti said.

"Mom it's urgent and I didn't want to delay it."

"What is it beta?" Gautam asked calmly.

"Dad how can you fix my marriage with a guy who has a five year old daughter?"

"Kriya you can't expect some unmarried guy to approach you with a proposal."

"Mom why are you so rude to me? And I know that. All I'm trying to say is can't I marry someone of my age. He looks so elder."

"Kriya he's just thirty years old."

"Yeah and I'm still twenty three. Seven years of age gap. I don't think it'll work plus how will I adjust there, with his family and his daughter."

"Kriya we understand you honey and we ain't forcing you. It's all up to you. And regarding Kaira, she's a sweet girl." Her dad said.

"Gautam, what do you mean it's up to her. She has promised to get married again. If she doesn't get married now then how will we fix Sharon's marriage. What will we answer the society? They'd probably think that there's some fault in Kriya due to which her husband died and no other man wants to marry her. It will ultimately effect Sharon too."

"Smriti stop." Gautam said in a stern tone.

"No dad it's fine. I'm kind of used to this behavior of mom. And mom I'm ready for this marriage. Do what ever you want now." Saying this Kriya left the room in anger.

"You shouldn't have said that." Gautam scolded smriti and both of them followed Kriya back to the living room.

"Is everything fine?" Rakesh, Rey's father asked.

"Yeah, absolutely fine." Gautam replied.

"So, Kriya are you ready for this marriage?" Preeti asked.

Taking a deep breath Kriya replied "yes aunty." She closed her eyes as she said thosw words and a lone tear escaped as she remembered the day when Rajeev along with his parents arrived here to meet Kriya's parents. Everything was just same except for two things. Reyansh had replaced Rajeev and the glow on kriya's face disappered. This was all the difference that mattered a lot.

"And what about you Rey?"

"I'm fine with it." Rey said in an uninterested tone.



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