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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Thank you for liking this series. Here's the third part. I was a bit busy yesterday so couldn't post it.



Part 3:



"Why are you so rude to Kriya these days?" Gautam asked smriti who was busy preparing the dinner.

"Gautam I'm not rude to her. I agree I do talk to her in a rude manner at times but that's my worry speaking. I'm her mother and like you even I love her. The thing is I get worried for her more than you and at times I become hyper. No mother in this world would want her child to stay unhappy. And I have a strong feeling that this marriage will really change our daughters life."

"Hmm, I hope the same."

"Yeah. Now will you leave my kitchen and let me cook?"

"Yes ma'am."

Meanwhile in Kriya's room Sharon lay her head in Kriya's lap whilst Kriya was caressing her hairs.

"Di...it feels so good." Sharon said to which Kriya smiled at her.

"Acha by the way di, did you like jijz?"

"I don't know."

"That's not an answer."

Before Kriya could reply her phone rang. It was some unknown number. Finally on Sharon's insist she picked up the call as she avoided to recieve calls from unknown numbers.

"Hello"

"Uh hey Kriya, it's Rey here."

"Oh hi."

"I was thinking if we can meet tomorrow for coffee only if you don't mind."

"Um, sure." She replied after a lot of contemplations.

"Cool, I'll pick you up at five." Saying this he hung up.

Their conversation was so formal as if they were on a business meet and are going to sign a contract. Well, for them this marriage was no less than a business deal.

"Though I'm getting remarried but for me you will always remain my love, my wife and my life. I've invited her for coffee only to tell her everything about you. Miss you love." Rey said standing in front of the huge photo of Payal that hung on the wall opposite to his bed.

"Why did you leave me Rajeev. Had you been here then everything would be fine. I don't want to someone else's wife. I miss you...miss you a lot." Kriya said holding Rajeev's photo in her hand.


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Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
its super awesome
but short
well i dont have any prob
if i get update of this on alternate days
loved it
loving the story
update soon

Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
AHM AHM Drabble series...
nyccc itss... hayee rey n kriya dono
kismat ke maare... pyaar se juda juda.
:( abhi tak ke saare parts hayee senti...the bt acche the
plzzz update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
reshhh

Unresin finally 😊

Awesome updates mannu 👏

Rey and kria both wer married to someone else

Rey has a daughter too 😲

Now they r gonna get married to each other 😳

Hope they fall in love soon 😊

Not liking smriti n this 😡

Eagerly waiting for their convo 😉

Update soon 😊

Loveddd all d parts 😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nice updt
Bechare rey aur kriya kismat ke maare pyaar se haare
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
MAnnu superb one...
Waiting for the meet soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
amazing update
but bohot chotu tha 🤔
well doesn't matter
please
please continue soon
it is getting more interesting...
PM me soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
amazing update
poor kriyansh
unki toh fate hi kharab hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
super ..awsome.. simply amazing... loved it...🤗

at least they will meet each other...

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
this is a different concept
mannu bahut hi fab hai
these drabble series are really nice
kr ko kabhi aese imagine hi nhi kiya
really nice
update soon

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