IN THE LIFT ~ Collab ArShi TS ~ [Part 2 Pg 13] {Completed} - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
I must say that you did wonders Mrina Di


first thing that I liked the most was that you justified the title

second thing I liked was that it was in blue

but the most important thing was that it was flawless and beautiful

"You're smiling? That's new!", he exclaimed.

"Oh please! It's not like I never smile!", I chided.

"Oh yes you DON'T SMILE!", he replied with special emphasis on the word don't. I rolled my eyes.


that was so true... well said Akash



"Ar-ar-nav!", she said with a slight stammer.

"Kh-khu-shi!", I imitated her with a grin.


this was so cute 😳


A gentle smile played on my lips as I understood the meaning of his statement yesterday.


loved the flashback

"Hey! I want the crazy teenager to work under me! You're getting so formal with me now!", he complained.



"Bhai! Did you speak to the client you wanted to? That deal? Umm.. what did she say?", he asked with a smirk wiggling his eyebrows at me.

"Akash! I'm trying to finalize that deal now, only if you don't disturb me!", I replied.

"Which deal Akash?", asked Khushi.

"You'll get to know!", Akash replied winking at Khushi.


I loved this part a lot... i know what was the deal 😊


"Ar-nav.. Don't go anywhere! Don't leave me here!", she whispered shivering in my embrace.

"I'm not going anywhere! Relax!", I whispered back hugging her closer.

After a few minutes the lights came back.

"The lights are back Khushi! Calm down!", I said.

She pulled away from my embrace gently.

"I will never ever go in a lift again!", she announced.

"Why?", I asked curiously.

"What if this happens again?", she whined.

"So? I'll be there with you na!", I replied waiting for her reply.

"You can't be there with me always na?", she asked.

"What if I am there in your life always?", I questioned back.

"How?", she asked looking into my eyes with her innocent doe shaped ones.

"Marry me! I will never let you alone in the lift! Why only the lift, I'll be there with you everywhere you go!", I said finally proposing her in the most unromantic and unique way ever.


this was a fabulous confession... in the same lift... wow




"I found my love, In the Lift!", she whispered.

"I planned all this! Just to confess my love to you in the place we first met,In the Lift!", I whispered.



luv


Mahi

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
thank u for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a beautiflul end...

Totally loved it😊

Thanx for pm😊

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ARSHI FF FORCED LOVE BECOME LIFE


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3664505/arshi-ff-forced-love-become-life-link-to-t2-on-page-1

ARSHI FF FAKE LOVE

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3715331/arshi-ff-fake-love-thread-2-link-on-page1-26-1
Edited by Krishika209 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such a cute TS!
Loved it and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful ending. thanks for d pm



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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Liked the idea of proposing in the lift. Arnav being nervous was cute. Beautiful ending. Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Excellent Ending.. Really loved the ending.👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
very sweet ending
Loved it
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear... loved it...
perfect ending... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...awesome plane to propose in a lift itself...i love both of them here..will wait fr ur nxt os

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