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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing work 👏

I loved this :D

Kash D3 mein bhi kuch aisa hi ho :D

CVs see this and learn from it...isse kehte hai swaron...and not what you're doing right now! 🤢 you're killing swaron 😡

Kuch tho sikhiye is Os se!

Amazing work varshu :) keep writing 😊

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Amazing work dear...Loved it the way u made Sawron together was wonderful.Specially SwaRon emotion frustration love care and the way they come across truth is awsm U take them from fighting to truth then emotion then love...Beautiful.I can able to visualize the whole scenario the way swaron would react if they were given such script. Superbly written.😊😊

Edited by vaishali_mhaske - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Loved it..thanks for writing this..mazaa aya padhkar..i hav read some of ur other works and i have loved all of them..keep writing..😊

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

this was simply beautiful di..

loved it so much

aapne isko kitni aachi tarah likha hain 👏👏

so emotional

so touching

great job !!

i loved reading it...

and the dialogues were fab

pleas do write more

and thankie for the PM 😳

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Vishaka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

varshu its brillent piece of work yaar...you have beautifully written it

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it was good

thanks for the pm

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

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Unres..

Wow un dono ko lock kar diya...

Yeh toh mein us din se bol rahi thi ki kash yeh dono kahin lock ho jaye n den dey have to talk..

N u wrote it varshu..

Wo wo dis was amazing yaar..

Amazing piece of work..

Very very well written..

I loved it..

D convo was outstanding very emotional n touching..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Beautifully written dear.. i loved the way u kept the situation real...SwaRon portrayed by u were perfect even between imperfections...they let out their feelings in front of each other...the emotions reached me ...u are truly amazing as writer😊..keep writing dear...

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

iut was awesome varshu di...loved it 😛

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

wow awesome one..
loved it alot..
the hightlight of this os for me was all swayam dialogues..yes just want swayam to tell sharon all this in show also..
n want badly sharon to take intiative this time..
n now seriously want gang to know their relation obivously not this way😆
but overall supreb os..
keep writing :)
n thanks for the pm :)

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