Aasan Nahi Yahan Aashiq Ho Jaana Swaron OS(current track)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

finally finish read ur this os... wonderful and amazing...
the way u express their felling was heart touch... loved it...
finally rey trick worked of locked up both of them together...
and after a lot of time and pour their heart to each other they confessed and kissed...
omg... 😆😆😆😆... shocked received the life to gang except rey
and they were caught red handed and rey is in trouble but any how loved
the interest end... 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hayye mein kya bolun

Chalo bol hi deti hun 😉

It was awsum amazing zabardast 👏

I luved it alooot se bhi zyada 😳

Kitne tym baad aisa os per rahi hun i so wish that kaash real mein bhi aisa hota but cvs itni meherbaan kabhi nahi hoti 😭

But aapi aap hogayi and i luv u for that 🤗

It was luking sooo real

Ur every dialogue was looking sooo real i dont know how to explain

It was just perfect for the situation

Their fight their taunts their everything

Aww poor swayam he cried 😭

End was hillarious whole grouped was about to faint 🤣

Sorrie for the late comment aapi

Thanku sooo much for the pm

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome os!!!

it was sooo reallistic...

swayam's dialogues are really heart touching...

you described swaron's emotions so beautifully...

just loved the os!!

thanks for the pm...

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Meera Banerjee

@meeryy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Uff superb! Finally kahin toh SwaRon ko united dekha...please Palki isey parhiye and apply keejiye...ASAP! I am dazed and tired with the current track...Swayam itna out of character stand nahi ho raha yaar!

Awesome One shot...impressed :)

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

varshu diii🤗
pehle to sholly😳late comment ke liye
Diii it was wonderful
I loved it
I liked how the story shifted from insulting to fighting to resolving to patch up so smoothly
I loved how you cleared their misunderstandings ladte hue bhi.
The burst out by both of them was so needed.
I loved swayam's dialogues saying that I tcan't always bhi him mending everything he needs cooperation and support too.
I loved how slowly yet steadily sharon understood where everything went wrong and realized the she was majorly at fault.
The hug and the patch up was lovely
the forehead kiss was so affctionate.
Lastly the kiss was pure bliss.
I loved Rey and the Gangs reaction on seeing them kiss.It was hilarious aapne to ek teer se do shikaar kar diye Swaron patch up bhi kara diya aur unka relationship bhi public ho gaya
loved it diii