~* Faith *~ An Astha - Shlok SS - updated Chapter 9 pg. 51

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Serviana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wonderful update!! I really liked it and please update soon!

Did not understand hindi parts 😭

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

That was an incredible start dear. Astha hates Shlok every bit and why shouldn't she. He deserves nothing more than that for what he did. I love this strong Astha.

Regards

Nidha.

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

That was incredible!!!

You wrote everything amazingly well. It was perfect!

Continue soon.

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Ally

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Great updates!

I think everyone has a strength when it comes to writing, and something that doesnt come easy to them. For me, I can write angst all I want, but romance I am terible at.

But for someone that struggles with drama, you produced 2 wonderful, drama-packed chapters!

At least Shlok isn't as cruel and revengeful in this one

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wow...wow...wow...

That were 2 intense updates; poor gal - totally get her pov on suhaag-raat.

Arymaan for his own one upmanship with Shlok has ruined Ashtha's life; but what I'm looking forward to is...Shlok making up for his bro-in-law; of course, it won't be all lovey-dovey.

-Sona

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Lovely update dear!!!!
I just read from starting all in one go and its absolutely amazing!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

And for next time plzz PM me ur updates of Aastha and Shlok works!!!!

Plzz continue soon!!!!

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dmgomg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I like how you made Aastha a strong character :) update soon!
Also, i can't find that account to send a buddy request to. Can you please give a link?

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome chapters.. waiting for the next one..Love our strong gal Astha.. 👍🏼

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome SS on Shlok and Ashta

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RaatkiRani

@RaatkiRani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

awesome piece!

Is there any way that you can add me so that I get a message when an update is out?

I am honestly sick of sorting though all the garbage pieces of writing online. While I appreciate the effort put in by writers - at least half the writers write for the sake of attention and "Likes". There is no plot, no effort and no thought that goes into their work.

Thanks.

Also, if you have other fics - send me a link!