~* Faith *~ An Astha - Shlok SS - updated Chapter 9 pg. 51

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stardust_0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
ooh feeling vy bad 4 Ashta😭

Wow! I thought maybe after this chapter I would get attacked by Shlok's fangirls for making Astha act so rudely with him 😆 But here it's the opposite! It's a good thing, I'm happy and proud that you all girls are understanding Astha.

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stardust_0

@stardust_0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: ManrajT
Totally loving it!!! Wow you make it so intense pace is perfect as u build up do much atmosphere and there is enough interaction to keep even a romantic like me reading n waiting impatiently for the next part!!!

Thank you sooo much!! I was afraid that I would lose the romantics but I'm happy that you are still enjoying and sticking around through all the drama! 😃 Will try to update soon! :) Thank you again!! :D

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Hanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Loved how astha stand up foe herself! Great update and continue soon!!!!

Edited by Hanaa91 - 11 years ago

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stardust_0

@stardust_0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: sweetshab
Awesome, brilliant,fantastic update :D
Loveddd it :D

Isshhh shlok hurt seeing her in pain ..i guessed it :D
And the whole hospital partt (dat reminded me of fallen angel hospital scene ;) )
And then his concern towards her. Gud she didnt protest while shlok took her to car,
OMG anjali worriedd nd she did cry for her :O
And than shlok facing the reality wat his bitterness nd revenge lead to...distancing his astha frm herself ..distancing her frm him
Ouchh he hurt himselff

Pyaar main bada dard hai

Cont soon

YAAYYY!! 😃 I'm happy you liked it Shab! ;)

Yeah you guessed it right! 👍🏼

And aww - you still remember scenes from that SS. 😳 And LOL - I try to be original but I guess I have a pretty typical manner of writing the males in my SS - they always have extreme reactions when their lady loves get hurt 😆

Hehe - the Anjali part - I have included it (hinting that there is more to her character then what meets the eyes) but now everyones so curious caz of that one sentence where she cried - Maybe I'm going to have to think more about her and her role in the SS now! 🤔 LOL you guys catch each and every detail!

Yep - Love Hurts. But DW - they will get their fair share of happiness soon. :D

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stardust_0

@stardust_0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: LuvStrk-001
Lovely updaye dear!!!Like the pace!!Ur going ib right dear!!!plzz do update nxt part soon want to know hw ur progressing there relationship!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!

Thank you so much!! I'm really happy you guys aren't finding the story too slow. 😃

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stardust_0

@stardust_0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: janestone6
Yes you updated. The wait was worth it. Kya update hain boss. Your nicely written.
At the start of the update I kind of felt bad for Shlok. He was so scared to see her like that. Did I read it correctly he was crying CRYING?

Go Astha you can safe your self. You don't need his help.

Astha's out burst was much needed.

Thank you! I'm glad I didn't disappoint you! 😊

Yes - finally someone tells me they felt bad for Shlok! 😆 Yes Astha was physically hurt but Shlok was emotionally tortured in this whole chapter!! (Yep, he cried. 😳)

I'm happy you felt bad for Shlok but also understood Astha's point of view. :)

Thank you so much for always leaving your lovely comments - I really look forward to them now! 🤗

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stardust_0

@stardust_0

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Jane523
awesome dear...
atlast spoke out all her feelings in front of shlok ...
may b now shlok will understand how broken she is...

Thank you!!

And yes you understood it right..although at first he is just extremely ANGRY, later when his anger cools down he will realize what his actions and coldness have turned Astha into. The girl is not only depressed and broken, but she's becoming a hate-filled mess with all the negative feelings she has in her heart for him! And hate is not a healthy emotion - at all.

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: SAnonymous
Very Nice Update

Thank you dear :)

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: Arnavishot
Do u even realise how awesome of a writer u r????? I mean... seriously... right now im supposed to be studying for psat and instead im fantasizing about whats gonna happen in the next chapter!!!!! Arrraghhh ! Feel like doing what shlok did with the glass!!!! LOL :) Seriously beautful update and please do update again soon ... LUv U <3 (Oh and thanks for the pm)

Awww!!! Thank you sooo much!

Your comment brought like the widest smile on my face! 🤗

And I'm sorry for distracting you 😳 Trust me, I'm going through the same problem - have exams to study for, but I'm so addicted to writing this SS and watching Astha and Shlok that I spend way too much time just daydreaming on them!

Thanks again for making my day! 😉 Luv ya more! 😛

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

So beautiful, you are an amazing writer, loved it. I am glad Astha let out her anger and pain, Shlok needed that, I really hope Shlok realizes how wrong he is, you are doing awesome, love the pace of the story, hopefully soon he will realize how lucky he is to have a girl like Astha in his life...