Saiyaara KR SS - FF - Drabble Series *Part 11 - Page 34 - 19/04/2014* - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
awesome update.
sorry for commenting late.
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awsum update anji..
loved it..
haye so atlast krisha reached mumbai..
reyam nd krisha r neigbhours awsum
loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
I love this one. Yayayayay!! :D
Tu toh mast likhti hai. :P
Hope that bff is Rey/Swayam. :)
I'll love it if it is Swayam! :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
nyc update...
krisha n reyam neighbours...
goshhh luggage was tooo much...
gals will b gals...
hope KR n SS wont start fighting...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Jst read all de chps...

Luvd it nd every chp
Amazingly written...
Reyam nd krisha neighbours...seem fun nd vry interesting..
Waiting to read more

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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Awesome

Ah-Mazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Finally in Mumbai

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
I LIke this ff now plz update soon n very big One ok😆
Amazing chpter
plz update big one 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
just read both the updates..
sorry was busy so couldnot comment early..
finally mumbai..
now eagerly waiting for further story
thanks for the pm :)
Edited by anushka1129 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7


As she opened the door, she was lost. Time stopped for her. Every other thing in this world was just nothing for her. She was just staring in those orbs. She was frozen. She didn't even move a bit. Just staring, right onto his eyes. She just couldn't comprehend what was happening to her. She was not able to react.


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REY POV


Swayam dragged me to the new neighbour's house. I was not at all willing to go but still, who can deny THE SWAYAM's orders. I was least interested in going to that house and meet new people. I only wanted to sit in my fluffy bed and enjoy my work. But my idiot brother. What to do, I can't even say him anything. He's just so precious to me. Anyways, we knocked the door twice and then a girl of about 20-21 years of age opened the door. I was seeing her from bottom to top. But when I reached her eyes, my eyes were struck there. I was unable to move an inch. I just kept staring into those almond shaped big eyes. Almost ready to kill me with their innocence. I didn't know what to say or how to feel. My senses were flying in the clear blue sky. But I was least bothered about anything right now. The only thing that mattered was her and those beautiful eyes. They seemed like a ocean for me, in which I was drowning.


POV ended


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"Ahem ahem" Swayam and Sharon coughed together to bring their siblings out of this weird situation. They didn't know what to do so thought to break their LLHH process. Swayam pulled rey back and greeted both KriSha.

"hey, I'm swayam, Swayam Singhania" he introduced himself and forwarded his hand for a handshake.



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Shenz di, chinta na karo, main armaan aur anjali love story nahi dikha rahi hun, mujhe bas uski gf ke liye ek naam chahiye tha toh just added anjali. so chillax :P :P

Aditi di, thank you thank you :D unn dono me se hi koi h, but you'll have to wait to know ho it is :P :D

Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 11 years ago
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