ArHi FF: The Same Coin#5

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

so the cat is out of the bag. glad that they both got it out of the way. u portrayed arnav's angst very well. the lost boy and the struggle to come back is all brilliantly written

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Terrific update...dat explains clearly why arnav is the way he is...quite an emotional update...u portrayed the emotions of arnav so beautifully...the whole update is so brilliantly written...Kudos to you...u r an awesome writer dear...Thanks for the update

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

I loved it. I felt this is the best chapter till now.
Potrayed arnav's emotion beautibeautifully.

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

WOW!!!!

WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPTER!!!

LOVED IT!!!

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

wow

that was a brilliant update

very emotional and every word of this update touch my heart..

poor arnav ..loosing his sibling was traumatic for him..

finally, arnav talk with khushi about his life..

this update given a whole new dimension to their relationship and this story..very touchy update..loved it..

Edited by chandni00 - 12 years ago

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Waah S Waah what a powerful and emotional chapter, you definitely answered all the questions that were going in my head, you definitely made me look at things from Arnav's perspective, you made me understand him more so thank you.

As I started reading I was so rooting for Khushi then my heart was breaking for her again with Arnav's harsh words. My mind started cursing him already for being such a guy for being one of those insensitive & arrogant jerks who just refuse to see things from their partner's perspective. This thought vanished as soon as I saw immediate remorse in him. Which in turn forced him and maybe made him acknowledged to himself as well that Anjali's suicide has affected him so much so that he basis his decisions on what happened in his past. He told her that he did not want to get so attached that he couldn't see life beyond her. The intensity of his feelings for Khushi had him scared off and he wanted to keep this in check.

Suicide is always a tough issue, I often see people judge the person who committed suicide and I don't get it. People can't see that if a person is willing to end their life, they must be going through hell, they are clearly not in the right state of mind to decide how will their death affect their loved ones so No I never judge a person who commits suicide because noone can place themselves in their shoes, noone can know what they are going though unless they are in their mind. Coming back to Arnav and Khushi, while he reassured her in a way that he cares for her more than he will ever be able to admit he still told her that he did not want to be as attached to her as Anjali was to Shyam that she couldn't see life beyond him. *sighs While the fact that Arnav openned up is definitely great progress in their relationship, it also made things more complicated.

Moving on to happier things, you do wonders with intimate scenes S. If one thing is definite is their attraction towards each other. Payal is such a sweetheart. Bonus was a good contrast to the rest of the chapter, light and fun.

Loved the chapter , will look out for the next chapter whenever you can bring it S!

PS. Apologies for my typos in advance, too lazy to edit :P

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

1. Where do I start? It was beautifully written.
2. It's always difficult to handle a sensitive topic like suicide, but that was written so well.
3. I think my respect for Arnav has gone up a notch. It isn't easy to live with the death of a loved one every single day, especially when the person has been so close to you.
4. I loved the update.
5. :D

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

that was so emotional...but then again that is wat life is all about..ups and downs..

i am glad khushi came to talk..and arnav talked...

and payal and aman are doing great it seems...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Loved it.. For the past 2 nights I was getting up after midnight and checking if this has been updated.. 😆🤣 Im such a gone case.. 😆 But seeing 9B only had dampened my spirits.. But as soon as I saw 9C.. Oh em gee... 😈

So coming to the update... One thing that I like abt ArHi here is that they don't beat around the bush.. They speak to each other abt it.. Though Arnav didn't , well it wasn't like he didn't want to.. Its just that he didn't like to relive all those painful times... Anjali left them but they all suffered the loss.. Arnav was so much broken... 🥺 Anjali's story is really heartbreaking.. She was totally shattered when Shyam left her.. 😒 And that made Arnav realize and follow that don't be so attached to a person that you might forget to live and breathe without him/her around you... Arnav knows what Khushi means to him.. Like he told her that he cares for her a lot and she shud never ever think that he doesn't coz she is very very important for him and their relationship too.. Love them and Im glad that its not another misunderstanding but they are so attached to each other emotionally.. So much that the others pain brings tears to their eyes.. This is love.. And Im sure they realize it too... Khushi coming back and hugging Payal.. That was just so sweet... Life is unpredictable.. I feel she will make things with her dad alright too... Just few updates more makes me sad though.. This is one of my favorite ...