ArHi FF: The Same Coin#5

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Loved the chapter semanti
But please dont talk about the story ending
Makes me real sad at having to let go of these people

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Whatever it was I was expecting from 9C it wasn't this. It's a tough life and you never really know someone till you do. And that can be scary. It IS scary. Who would've thought Raizada had these demons to fight.

And judge Anjali? Can anyone do that without being her? Suicide is a harsh truth. I can't imagine the state of being so overwhelmed that death is the solution. What must be a persons life for it to come to that, where every other person becomes meaningless.

It's not easy. But then what relationship is.

At least they now talk. Gupta and Raizada have a chance because they want it. What more can you ask for!

Powerful writing,S and as always done with undramatic elan.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

This was truly beautiful

their relationship moved levels

he opened up about everything, his deepest feelings and the situation is not an easy one to discuss

he also has made it very clear as to why he was a bit aloof but what she truly means to him

now as she said she knows and is aware rather than shooting arrows in the dark so she is very content

from tenderness and wanting to care to a never before passion and desire, which was left midway because of time :P

his story has also made her realise what she needs to do, life is short and she can't give up on ANY relationships so i see her attempting to mend the one with her father

Payal is a cute sister, she could tell there was something off and is all but ready to cancel her plans with her almost fella to be with her sister

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Beautiful & Emotional chapter.

Loved it!

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Stories like these always mess with my heart...i get so sad i had to stop reading in the middle and think of happier things...its the way u've written touches the heart you didnt go in details but the way arnav has accepted such a big trauma in his life it just made me so sad!

Beautifully written!

I cant stop thinking about it...suicide is the saddest thing a person can do with their life no argument can change that!

Loved the update!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Aww, that was real sad... Poor arnav, he had seemed so normal, even Aakash & V, who would have thought he would be hiding so much grief within him... Poor thing!

I am glad that Khushi now knows what the problem is with her man & I loved the fact that Arnav feels so deeply about Khushi as well... So glad to see Khushi make a resolve not to give up on Arnav or their relationship...

Already waiting for the next update...

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Can't judge. Won't judge. This was a really intense chapter. Might also explain V's reluctance to commit to a future with NK. It explains a lot. :'-(

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Kya karo ge jaan ke

@nidhu18

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

OMG! That was the most amazing chapter I have ever read. So emotional that I cried buckets ( beleive me when I say this I am not emotional kind) you have done a brillant job writing all the emotions. I can relate to Arnav's emotions here since I myself have lost a cousin brother the same way when I was not even 10 yrs old.
Glad now Khushi and Arnav's relationship will grow in right direction.
Looking forward to the next update.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Wow this was a brilliant chapter... Very beautifully written... Explains y Arnav n V run or at least afraid of committing to khushi n NK...

I don't support suicides but set how that thought might come

Lovely update

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Very emotional and painful update...Feeling very heavy hearted...it must be very tough for arnav to loose his Di in such an incident...thanks for the PM