ArHi FF: The Same Coin#5 - Page 49

That was an intense chapter and very well executed. Arnav's story was heartbreaking. It makes sense as to why he kept some distance between him and Khushi. While things got intense physically I was glad you stopped them and there was no anger; in such moments often times emotions get the best of us and can lead us to do things that we can regret. I imagine this will bring them together and closer however I do wonder if this will make Khushi extra cautious and a bit gun shy.

It was a very tactful decision on your part to have mentioned about suicide between a waging arnav and khushi somewhere during the initial stages of the story and bringing it as a major determiner in the puzzle that arnav Singh Raizada remains, is highly commendable. You have everything about this story already planned which shows the meticulous writer that you are. Now there is an explanation behind Arnav's reservations in the relationship. To know that he is serious about the relationship but not for going to the extent that it takes over one's life beyond a point of no return, is comforting. But there is more to it, isn't it? What difference this truth will make in khushi's life remains to be discovered.

I slept off AFTER the note..*sigh* ...anyways...res

Unressing..

Semanti...All through TSC we hav seen just the lighter part of the story...break ups..crushes...relationships...
Everything was soo normal?? Yup..we had lil emotional scenes...if u count them as emotional ones dat is..but THIS was emotionally draining update of TSC.The one that answers many things about the story.

The basic one being why had The ArHi fights begun.

I am not judging anyone.Imagine a person who spins all their dreams..all their hopes...their future around a single person?? And that person in turn treasures u so much??? Do u need anything more?? But wen that same person is literally snatched away from you...can u look beyond the void they have created..can u stop the memories from replaying themselves thousands of times in ur head and can u survive knowing that u cannot hav amy more such memories ?? Anjali couldnt think about anything other than the loss she had just suffered...and i dont think leaving her alone in such situation was right..but call it destiny or anything...she had followed Shyam.

Tht one line... "..that he was not going to cone back to cheer her up" ..that just touched me ...i teared up at that sentence...even Arnav had to go through so much..so so much..i felt like giving him a oh so tight hug when he was talking about how he could see and hear her everywhere...it isnt his fault that he cannot completely give into this relationship.

V had always followed her around but this time she didnt want to...she didnt want to dream about a future she wasnt sure wud happen...the Raizada siblings were really effected a lot due to this and i think they are justified and i hope their partners understand them too.

A and K have come a long way now!!! Lets see how theyre gonna face their future together.Hats off sem.wonderful update.

well i couldnt resist commenting this time...i literally cried all the way through this chappy...
big claps too good...

very emotional update and I had tears in my eye's! It helps that your writing is so beautiful that I cna picture it as a scene to be enacted by Barun and Sanaya that is the power of your writing.

Never ever expected this...Anjali's story is really really sad...such an emotional update...but tonight Arnav-Khushi's relationship took a large step ahead...and I believe it will go more & more better only...beautifully written...thanks for the mail...

d most awaited tlk

i have no words for this chapter...

Totally stumped. I knew something major had occurred in Arnav's life but certainly not this. With hindsight, we should have known that Anjali and shyam would feature in this story somehow. Yes suicide is always incomprehensible and it is always those who are left behind who suffer the aftermath and have to deal with the situation. I do not wish to judge Anjali but for me the gesture is nothing but totally futile!

So now we are seeing Arnav in his full glory with all his insecurities brought forth. If possible I have fallen even more for Arnav and his family after knowing this. As they say never judge a book by its cover. I am so glad that Khushi forced this conversation. I am sure things between Arshi will work out well as the willingness on both sides is there. Wouldn't it be good for Arnav to have a chat with his father about Anjali and Khushi and all his fears about making someone too special in his life?

I also hope that for Khushi this convo with Arnav will bring some much needed perspective about her relationship with her dad which she needs to mend somehow before it is too late. And maybe she may also consider doing something about her fear for the dark and reach out and seek help.

In all of this, the lovely Payal and Aman convo just got eclipsed but did I just see the L word somewhere!! Things are indeed moving fast in that direction!

I also wonder if NK and La have had/ will have a conversation about Anjali considering that she was close to V too. As for Akash - he is still an enigma to me in this story.

Ps- you have done an awesome job as writer. For me everything described was just spot on.

iam thoroughly distressed from Arnavz narration of the ghastly incident of his family... oh God... he's come a long way n my admiration for him has increased leaps n bounds.. it was very easy for him to succumb totally to the way of life he had a brief encounter with after Anjali's death... but , he had come out beautifully i must say... poor guy , the range of affection he has for khushi scares him cuz god forbid , if something of the bad sort happens to either of them , he will not be able to take it n neither can khushi hence keeping the deliberate distance.. cant blame him though... it wud be soothing for him when he next time shares it with khushi... ab bhi after the talk , thoda tho uska mann halka hua hoga...!!!