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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont hate Anjali infact feel sorry for her ...when people kill them selves they do not realise they are killing a lot of ppple around them emotionally.
the anger the pain they give to siblings parents friends is too much

when u are in a relationship u should grow as 2 seperate people ..
about love i love what khalil Gibran says seperate get together ...

one needs friends apart from a partner ...

life has to go on

PS this all is not gyan but fro personal experience
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Posted: 12 years ago


I loved this chapter :)

The explanation and back-story of Arnav's character justified his state of mind, nature and behavior to the hilt. His immense sincerity and yet withdrawal traits in the relationship stems from a sister who had an unhealthy attachment to her boyfriend. And he wants to avoid that and no one can blame him.

I am glad that they had this talk. This update takes the story to a whole new level.

Very very nice :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another heart wrenching chapter

It is such a traumatic experience to face in life...With Anjali I just could never understand what people actually are capable or doing or not doing when such thing strikes. To love someone more than oneself and then when that somebody goes away forever what does life feel like to live. Yes I admit suicide is an act of cowardice and no one has the right to take away ones life but a rational mind knows that, understand that. Not a broken one. She must have been dead within herself and not think about the other people around her and take such a drastic step.

My heart cried out for Arnav and the family. No wonder he is so scared to give himself completely to anyone, to commit himself to an happily ever after but am glad that he has initiated this conversation with Khushi. Powerful dialogues, beautiful expression of the moments shared and perfect blend of lighting in and out. I could almost visualize the setting and the scene.

And then the physical outburst of it. I am so glad you have wrote that part as it would have been in complete without Arnav expressing it physically as well. I could feel his agony, his desperation to make her understand and finally the surrender to find solace in her body.

I am sure Khushi 's relationship with her dad will go through a make over as well. Loved how she mused about how every relationship was worth fighting for.

It has come to my knowledge that you understand Bengali..Kobi Guru r bhashai" achhe dukkho achhe mrityu biroho dohono lage tobuo shanti tobuo anondo tobu ananto jage" May Anjali's soul and so the souls of numerous people rest in peace who gave up the urge to live as they didnt view life was worth living anymore. May God give us the strength of mind not to ever come across this feeling in life.
Edited by Aparamegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just shut down my work email and wanted something nice to read before i slept...
I must say it wasnt what I was expecting...but it was very well written and I enjoyed every word...

losing family is very difficult and you handled the subject delicately and beautifully...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Quite a revelation...tragic and sad...
That explains Arnav's behavior, his fears...
Sem, every character in this story is adorable...be it our protagonists, A,s mom, Payal or even their professors...u have caricatured them perfectly...
Waiting for the next...
Edited by mimosa658 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I literally had tears in eyes...I hope that explains how I felt about the update 😭😭😭😭

I love how they don't shy away from each other & just be themselves around each other without any pretense thinking what the other will think.
It must have been really hard to write...👏👏👏
BEAUTIFUL !!!
Edited by skmr.bs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah...now now! this was something i never expected.
i often used to wonder whether there are no anjali and shyam in this story of yours, but this revelation...was...unexpected!
i m so so proud to tell u that u really did justice to arnavs fears...abt what he feels for khushi, what he expects himself to be...from thie relationship!
i m glad khushi provided him the comfort he needed!
even i wish she didnt hav to leave...
payal and aman are cute-as always...i secretly wonder will there be any future of payal-akash?!

thanx for the happy reading moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poignant indeed!!!! Everything s falling into place now!!! Khushi hd to take an extra step towards arnav n extremely sensible approach towards d whole issue!!!! Superb update n arnav's take on anjali's issue s beautifully penned down!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can understand the time it took you to write this, Semanti.
This was an emotionally heart wrenching chapter.
There was a reason behind Arnav and Lavanya having relationship issues.
They saw Anjali giving up her life for her love which had become an obsession for her.
Other relationships and friendships didn't matter any more for her.
It is never good to make one person the reason for one's existence.
Arnav has taken one big step forward in this relationship by tellin Khushi about Anjali.

Love the Aman and Payalji couple. When their relationship comes out in the open there will be an earthquake!

I wait for your updates and dread them too.
DOn't want this to get over. Only three chapters left.
I'm going to miss this.
Hope you are thinking of starting another one soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have described feelings so flawlessly its amazing...in everyone's life we have seen the turmoil when someone dies...in us..in family..its hard to cope
anyways it was an amazing update :)

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