New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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Alyaa_27

@Alyaa_27

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

OMG!
i luv it sooo much!!!!
i've gt tears in my eyes!
i luv the story!!!
never ever give up on anything ppl!always fight!

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bs1224

@bs1224

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Thanks for pm

That was outstanding ..man ..

I only have one word to and that's PERFECT...

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

amazng

i dnt hav any words 2 say

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tabzz

@tabzz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Beautiful 👏
Arnav Explaining Khushi Was Super... Just Mind Blowing 👏

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

very good ...wonderful story...human mind is so deep...where it can take you can't imagine...a loving person with love and care can pull you out

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

That was beautiful...

You kept up the mystery very well...No one who reads the first chapter will think of such an ending...

Awesome update and a moral ending...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Wow that was a perfect end to this amazing short story,

The update was so beautiful and mind blowing,

Awww love the fact they had a happy ending, simply amazing.

The story has been written exceptionally well and has been a wonderful read.

Thank you for writing this story as it has been a pleasure to read.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Mindblowing and marvelous.
Heat ponders story.
How lovely he took her to soothe her pain.
I cried dring read.
Such it is a unique one.
Tf pm.

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

I read ur update and then went to Uni , with a huge smile plastered on my face, and tears in my eyes as my heart twisted and writhed at the the sheer intensity of #Arshi's love !!

What a concept Ray !! I mean, wow ... like I cant even get words to describe it !

It was Arnav's heart crying out to Khushi all the while, his heart which lives inside her , bleeding for her to wake up from her deep dark pain and come back into his arms , into his life, to rebuild their life together, to maybe even create a new life , erasing the pain of what they lost !

srsly Ray, the way he explained it to her and how she woke up crying and running into his arms, u caught the connection of their hearts belongingt o each other so perfectly !!

am bookmarking ur SS along with the same label under which Innocence is bookmarked, am not letting it go ever !!

P.S. I saw ur status whr u were saying u need a place whr u can put not just ur Fics but anything u write, Ray .. idiot .. dnt think so much, start blogging , and leave it to us to help u spread it !!

Its the first step to your dream

Damn Y didnt I think of telling u this before !!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Superb superb superb update

Brilliant beautiful ending.

The story looks like the movie inception but with different idea.

The mannat key played an important part in the epic lovestory of arnav and Khushi.

Love the scene when arnav told Khushi to trust him and to come out from the hard shell she has built around her. People get to live once and people should not stop living it and making it meaningless because of pain and grieves.

Love the whole story.

Brilliant work.

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