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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Your story is very intriguing but interesting.

So many layers...peeling them slowly is half the fun

Adore your drool worthy Mr GQ. Am constantly reminded of BS's sexy photoshoot from last year!

Pls pm me when you update

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Nice banner😳

It adds colour to the story😊

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: camlin

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First ever Banner for Towards the Edge guys.😃😃Thank you Geeta di (Crazy4Sobti</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">) and Disha Di (_Disha_) for your efforts. You are the best!!!😃😃</font>

perfect model Wala Arnav!!!!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

wah wah!! It has that something that depicts the essence of the story.. Lovely!

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Richa

@richaarshi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

awesome chapter

so arnav will finally know about khushi

thanks for the PM

update soon

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

Don't know about dark but intense for sure.

Thank you for giving this insight to characters, helped in understand them better.

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

un-resed my comment on pg-124!

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

thats a beautiful banner!!
Wonderful work by both di's :)
Cheers to TTE!! :D

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

I think you did really well with this update.

The whole crux of the story being the evilness of Rana and how he along with sheetal have played with so many lives.

Rana is beyond cruel no doubts about that but at what level is Sheetal stooping so low where they have knowingly pitted Shyam against Anjali. They are half siblings and right now he is very close to being an incest. (correct me if i am wrong , quite possible i have jumbled up few characters).

And Raghu is looking like an easy target esp with his secret about Anjali which Rana has uncovered !

I am still not able to understand if Rana and Sheetal were so into each other why did sheetal marry shashi ? I think i have missed something important here.

I can understand Arnav's resentment due to the loss of his parents ,and also his rough relationship with Akash.

I was pleasantly surprised with Cara's acceptance over Arnav distancing himself from her. She really showed class.

Lots of mystery still remains especially why was Akash going to meet Sheetal ?

Hope you do well with your interview and get back with a super update.

As your note suggests it will be a confrontation between Arnav and Khushi i cannot wait to read it !

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: addictedx53
Why does Arnav think the worst of Khushi just because she has lied that she is alone? I may have missed something, but Akash's involvement in this intrigue? I think I need to read the story again.

Arnav had trust issues. When you feel something as treacherous as what Arnav feels for Khushi you are bound to feel a little insecure. There haven't been any subtle conversations between both of them. The attraction they feel leaves no room for discussions and to top it up they are two stubborn idiots who were their egos high on their heads. I plan to make them a little forthcoming towards each other in the next chapter and hope to dispel your doubts regarding Arnav's reactions. Though he won't change over midnight. He has a long way to go before he is strong enough to fight the actual threat that is looming over his and Khushi's head. Both need to grow with each other and for that talking is important.

I hope I was able to clear some of your doubts?😛

Love

Paakhee