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Livania Govender

@sarunarshi72

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow! That was great
A slap
Oh no
Khushi definitely contradicting herself
Thanks for the pm
Cant wait for more

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

even better now SS
which is what i said in the beginning too
wow that was intense
and yes their relationship does seem more complicated than before
but its there
wow that was some slap she gave him
not that i blame her
but really in front of her house
can we not have done this inside people
but guess thats what gave it more edge
hmmm arnie i would be saying or doing things that you dont want to make things worse than they are
but when has he ever listened
cant wait for more
cheers for pm

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

fabulous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏

update the next soon dear😃

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

loved the update loved the fight and he is right protect one home is very important and loved the passion between them and the slap awesome update thanks for the pm

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Venkata

@venkata

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome update. Loved the update. Arnav is really tough. Thanks for pm.

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Good to know 2 more parts r on d way!arshi REALTIONSHIP is really confusing

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hiralhk

@hiralhk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awesome.. its so romantic...
why she slap him??
waiting for next part..

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Just finished all 3 parts.
Harsha so glad to have you back and your note about IIT meets DU wow look forward to it!

The 3rd part was hot! She wanted assurance that she mattered and he gave her a dose of hot $#x
and she slapped him!
eagerly waiting to read further!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

I thank Shruti21's post for this recommendation. IF never ceases to surprise me with the secret treasure trove of authors and stories. I keep wondering how / why I have never read anything you've written before. You have a very refined way of writing - the flow is so beautiful and evocative. I personally love courtroom dramas and while this isn't one in the traditional sense, it has the essence of that thrill that comes from courtroom scenes - the verbal sparring, the attack, the defense and the counter attack and what better than a lawyer who is as sharp as this Arnav.

And yes, the web of relationships is not laid out in the open yet but that's the thrill of a story such as this. And woah that's some chemistry between the leads. I have always been partial to stories where the leads' professional lives intersect to create drama and turmoil

Waiting to see where you take this!

Cheers

Meera

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hi Harsha, just caught by with your story, all thanks to shruthi21 who recommended your story and I simply loved it. Its a simple story but with complex characters, which makes it all more exciting. I am loving your advocate arnav and I guess its his love for his place & its heritage, which makes him shrewd & ruthless. Khushi on the other side seems to be aware of the astute businessman shyam and his manipulative ways but still has gone ahead with the project and when arnav pointed out the same, she seems to ireful & furious. I am still not able comprehend khushi and shyam's relation, for that matter even khushi & arnav but I am sure it will get unfold in the coming updates.I totally loved the way you have put up the story and I sincerely hope it continues without stopping with just 5 chapters.