// Toxic //* Removed * ( Last Part - Pg 52)

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Wow I just read the three parts in a go and I am loving mature aspect honestly you write it with a lot of passion and dont make it sound to erotic which is an art.

I am a fan of yours and only IPK fanfic I read is yours and loving this one as well.

Keep up the amazing work and cant wait to read more :)

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

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I am so happy that there are two more chaps for the story.
I knew it was Arnav and they shared some sort of relationship. Those passionate moments were written so beautifully. Khushi wants to confront him but her need for him overpowered.
And the most unexpected thing for me was that slap. Cont soon :)

Edited by Chipmunks. - 12 years ago

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

That was really hot
I could feel like I'm there
You are really good
I waiting for the last parts

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

ahem ahem...you rock in writing matured content. Rough and wild sex, ripping and anger is a positive stimulant to sex- an observation which I made through FFs. The slap was my favorite..

"I don't like to share" --- this dialogue by men is another thing which I have noted..so possessive right?

Arnav was arrogant best and Khushi helpless when it comes to him...

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

another amazing & intriguing part...he's arrogant , possessive & intimidating ..she's hurt, angry but definitely love him...their make out ..umm it was more like arnav's claiming his right on her & she gave in out of love & frustration ...oh the slap was a real surprise.!!!
what i'm not getting is shyam's equation with arshi...