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Camlin

@Camlin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

So, I loved the slap the most😆. Man! That slap was almost erotic!

And, Harsh hands down for writing the scene so brilliantly. Though I was lost for most of the part before and had to read it again, I still loved the whole thing so so so much!

You are such a brilliant writer and you say I am good with words! I stand nowhere around you, really.

You have left me so much more confused regarding their relationship. I am not writing about individual characters right now, because I am not able to judge them. So, once I am able to reckon, I shall comment accordingly.

Hope you update soon.

PS: Sorry for the late comment, but college has been busy!

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

LOVE IT. love it. LOVE it.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Came across this story today..by Shruti..thx

Really toxic...they are quite a couple I must say...that must have been some slap!

Looking forward to Mr Raizada's reaction...

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Liya123

@Liya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Read all the chapter in one go. I am hook with the story.arnva is a very strong man. Also talented lawyer. But what kind of relationship they share? Why kushi slap him.? Why Arnav soo possessive toward kushi? Overall it was amazing.update soon

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

It definitely did not feel like it was your first time writing such a passion-filled scene between Arnav and Khushi. I'd say it was more beautiful, especially with the way you penned down their troubles thoughts, with law coming in between the raw need & attraction they feel for each other. I knew something was up the instant their eyes connected in Chapter 1. This confirms it all. Cant wait to know more though!

Have sent a buddy request, so that I can read all your future writings :) (Im going to definitely go back and read all your past works too!)

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

I love the way you've written it. However, arnav is unnecessarily mean, I don't believe in the concept of one party being more dominant which is why I do not agree with the behaviors. but the stories is very well written and thrilling.

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

harsha.. update na please ..i'm sooo waiting for it

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

wow interesting n intriguing story. quite unique. 😊

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: win7
Please update soon!

Originally posted by: farha_ipkknd
harsha.. update na please ..i'm sooo waiting for it

Guys I know I promised to update and I have already done my side of the bargain i.e written the update but Wi - fi par kiska zor chala hai !

My Wi - fi isn't working properly. I have already registered the complaint but expecting quick service is like expecting snow in Sahara. Hopefully I will be able to update on Saturday. Sorry to keep you all waiting.

- Harsha

Edited by harsha.. - 12 years ago

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Oh Gosh let me take a breath.

what an intense love making. Or moreover they are under the open sky. Thank God that nobody saw them. Uff what a passion. and the slap at the end baffled me. Khushi was very much responsive, but why she slapped him?

your description of their flagrant desire was giving me aphrodisia.

In spite of the professional difference they are just insanely attracted to each other. But it's not clear yet, that are they in love or not.

Amazing writing.