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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

You are back mademoiselle, what a pleasant surprise! I was eagerly awaiting for an update for this super intriguing SS.

So we got a little bit of insight into the nature of the relationship that our protagonists share, it seems like it was attraction at first sight ;). You have definitely done wonders with this story Harsha and what a fitting title too. It definitely describes the kind of equation Arnav and Khushi seem to share.

As usual you made me be with Khushi, all the way, I felt her anger, her frustrations, her sense of betrayal and being used. Loved the way she gave it to him straight up, first with the slap and then with her outburst. He surely deserved it and I say deserves some more beating. If I were Khushi I would have definitely thrown something at him too in the end.😆

This update was power packed, I would love to now hear how Arnav will pacify Khushi. So far he seems nothing more than a control freak opportunist who always gets what he wants. Now did I mention how much I commend you for this intensity that you have created in Arshi's equation. It is super strong and wonderfully described. Looking forward to moreee and update soonish yeah?

PS. I miss IIT meets DU ..*sniff

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

That was freaking hilarious

Their first meeting was very full of adrenaline

Oh dear

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Okay will get to it in half hour

Okay naah now only

What was he thinking

Except he wasn't was he

Oh man he didn't

So they can make love out but can't talk

Wow what a meeting they had

That was something
hmmm what a scene that sure was
hmmm she sure got to him

Seems they are like that only

Fighting with one another

And he don't seem to wanna let go of her

But will she listen

She won't make it easy for him

But that's what makes it so much fun

Hmmm what is he gonna say

And will she wanna listen to him

Hell no

Cheers for pm
they are like fire and fire aint they
and shy and arnie she aint anyone property so quit it will ya

Shy its time you move on mate

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

great story but the writing style is sometimes bit confusing

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Loved the update... Fire anger passion...three words describing ARSHI in this story...probably we can add EGO too to it... Waiting to know what Arnav will do to hold on to khushi...?

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Nice update cant wait to c what wil arnav do now

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

i just lurrvvved their violent love. i was shocked when she slappend him Hard. but then it seemed normal for them. n their 1st meet was wonderful. her savior on a horse. like literally. attraction on the 1st sight.
n then the scene changed to the present. loved her angry avatar. good for him. she shud defo treat him in this way. 😉
n shyaam saw them. n even he understood that its time to move on. 😊

so what are our beloved ASR's plan to keep his sunshine with him.