AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd

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priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Such a nice update, bravo Astha

Good luck for your exams😃

Thanks for the pm

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

so happy to see the update! Lovely story line and a good update:)

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

oh cool thanks for the quick update with chapter 4. I didnt expect the girls to take over the company so easily, but it was nice to see shlocks surprize and anger:) surprized that she hasnt divorced him. Good luck with your exams:)

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Gud luck 4 ur exams dear! Nice update😃

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ANAM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Thnx for update...
All the best for exams...

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Tich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Hostile Takeover

The title itself is so intriguing and sexy.

And i loved Astha in your story TILL NOW.

Please dont make her a doormat in flashback. Let her just be a sufferer.

And then everyone Neena, Astha, Kevin meant BUSINESS. Nothing else. Straight to the point.

Shlok ki toh lag gay.

i am really happy with your writing style jaan. Crisp, simple english and straight to the point. You know how to make drama gallore and emotions interesting.

I'll wait for the updates of this FF but wont pester you to update coz i know you have exams.