AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd - Page 16

Originally posted by: latha_555

oh cool thanks for the quick update with chapter 4. I didnt expect the girls to take over the company so easily, but it was nice to see shlocks surprize and anger:) surprized that she hasnt divorced him. Good luck with your exams:)

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Gud luck 4 ur exams dear! Nice update😃

Originally posted by: khuwahish

Thnx for update...
All the best for exams...

Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher

Hostile Takeover

The title itself is so intriguing and sexy.

And i loved Astha in your story TILL NOW.

Please dont make her a doormat in flashback. Let her just be a sufferer.

And then everyone Neena, Astha, Kevin meant BUSINESS. Nothing else. Straight to the point.

Shlok ki toh lag gay.

i am really happy with your writing style jaan. Crisp, simple english and straight to the point. You know how to make drama gallore and emotions interesting.

I'll wait for the updates of this FF but wont pester you to update coz i know you have exams.

Originally posted by: lachii

good luck with exams but plz plz do not abandon the story...take your time to update...but do update even if after exams...

there are many abondoned stories in ashlok story archives and i do not want another addition to that pile when the story is so powerful one

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
plz pm me when you update
and good luck for your exams

Originally posted by: CavingIn

I will try not to abandon it Lachi. But balancing medicine course and my love for writing is proving to be quiet the task.

By now I guess you know what my thought line is about women.

I will be glad if you are still interested in the story. If not thank you for being here so far.

Originally posted by: lachii

i think you are referring to bingy's post...you misunderstood me dear...hmm...anyhow i am very much interested in your story and would like to read it when you get time to update...

Originally posted by: lachii

There r all different kind of ppl in the world, n very few patient ones n it takes a lot of courage to move on n get a life of your ow n too.

One does not need to agree with the characters, their thinking, n reactions n actions etc to enjoy a story. A story is enjoyable when the characters n their traits n reactions are realistic enough to be relatable to real life, , the intensity may be heightened to add masala factor. One agrees with their traits etc or not does not matter, just like in real life, one cannot approve or disapprove someone bcz they do not act or react according to one's norms.

There are ppl who live naked n there are ppl who live in veils , both are right in their own might n both have freedom to live n exist as they like, when we agree to disagree, life n world becomes enjoyable n tolerable.