AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Thank u so much for this!I cant find anything to criticise except no Shlok!😆Okay plz update ASAP..Its only getting more and more interesting!Girl power!😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Amazing update.

Thank you😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx
OMG You updated!! Can't explain how excited I got when I saw it said part 2! :D

And this second part was just as good, or ever better than the first. Honestly, I am so impressed with your writing skills and the way you've created this strong Astha!

Shlok changed in Astha's absence? 😳 That line definitely warmed my heart though I know he's probably still majorly misogynist (or not?) but the fact that Astha's absence made a difference to some extent in his dark life is really pleasing. :D

And have to say, my favourite line had to be this:

" In business relationships doesn't matter. I learned that from the best Mr. Agnihotri" Astha replied and Shlok felt as if someone had landed a stinging slap on his face.

That and all the other dialogues exchanged between them was pure genius! 👏

Overall, I heartily enjoyed this chapter and am super-excited for the next. PM me if you do pm's and continue soon!

Thank you dear.

Creating a strong Astha was and is my wish. I like and respect strong women a lot. Also I know that they aren't born in a day.

Hence the four year gap. Astha has learned a lot in this while.

Shlok cannot have been totally unaffected by Astha right? He did change a bit. But to what extent let's wait and watch.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: dmegha
fantastic and superb update!!
I loved Aastha nad Shlok covo!!
Neena and Aastha's banter was sweet!
And Suresh's p.o.v. in between was amazing!
Continue soon.

Thank you dear.

Friendship is my favorite subject to write on. Hence Astha and Neena.

Ab chaar saal ke baath Astha tho chup nahin rahegi. Ulta Shlok ki bolthi bandh kar degi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Hey nidha,,..finally u update ...nice one...I like this powerful astha...and when will u update temptation...have been waiting for it

Thank you.

I know I am the lousiest updater available. Hence the updates are late.

Astha has changed for her own good. Now she is going to rise up.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: rbb1
Wow great update, love the new strong Astha, can't wait to read your next update

Thank you.

Will try and update as regularly as possible.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: -RK_Ki_Biwi-
mindblowing update.. 😊
waiting for next one .
do update soon..

Thank you dear.

Will update as regularly as possible.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
awesomeee updateee :)

Thank you dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: MalikaRose
Another great update :)
I'm really enjoying the story

great work Nidha

continue soon

Cheers>

Thank you dear.

Miss you writings and presence in the forum.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Beautiful!Ur writing style and storyline reminds me of Penny Jordan!😉But I have to say it was a pleasure reading the chapters..I am loving it!Plz update soon!Nd do PM me!😛

Thank you dear.

It's an honour to know my writing is liked. It's also humbling.

Do continue reading and commenting.