Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 47

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

MY Name Is Shlok...Shlok Agnihotri...Astha Kirloskar's finace...wow kya entry hai...
superb updet...i like it...

Thank U!😃

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

omg those creeps rohan and karan i hope shlok gives dem a good answer for all this

do update soon

Updating!😉

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

wow this going grt

Thank you!😛

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Ohhh dear god astha tormented by two unfamiliar leeches trying to play with her virtue..
Shlok finally reached there and fiance?? Super eager and excited for the next update.. Shlok is definitely going to give a hrad time to these two goons..

Thank u!Updating!😉

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Awesome really loved it thank god shlok cane but did he just say he is astha fianc... Now I really can't wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm

Thank u so much!Updating dear!😉

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

awsum update...
shlok entry was awsum...

Thank u so much!😃

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Oh man..this chapter was friggin SCARY! Felt horrible for Astha! You did a phonemonal job describing all of it! 👏

But OMG - did Shlok just say Fiance!?😲 😆

So excited for the next chap

Update soon! :D

Thank u so much!😳Updating soon!😉

Originally posted by: kimanie87

Just read all 9 chapters in one go!

I totally love it and I think you have very good writing skills :)

Looking forward to your next update.

Please pm me. Thank you :)

Thank u so much for commenting and liking my work!Will update soon and PM u too!😉

Originally posted by: .Siham.

Awesomeee updateee

Thank you!😛

Originally posted by: Sofna

Yayyy 🥳

That was quite a terrifying updte😲...

🤣I love ur comment!😆U r happy dt it's terrifying or sad?!😉