Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 18

awesome story..rread it in one go...update soon...pm me too...

Beautiful update dear!!!!

Wn vll u update it????jaldi karo na... i can't w8 plxxx

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Aastha fall on him again...😲
now only bappa saved her...
and Mr.Shlok Agnihotri the perfect man...
kya hoga Aastha ka...very nyc FF...
loved it...👏
and Thanks for PM dear 😊

Astha is incorrigible after all!😉Lets c wat happens to her..😛Thank u!

Originally posted by: khuwahish

nice... keep it up 👍🏼

Thank you!😛

Originally posted by: MalikaRose

Aastha sure loves to fall on top of Shlok😆

great update dear

really enjoyed it :)

continue soon

Cheers>

She just cant help herself!😆After all given the chance,who would?!😉Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: mimoza12

aaahhh she fell on him..

aahahhh so excited...what will HE do???

Ok, Shlok is very funny.. The line withe the air conditioner was great 🤣

enjoyed the update... waiting for more

Let us see wat he does!😉Thank you!

Originally posted by: Live-life

Nice update!!!!

Loved it!!

POor girl!!! She must know now that

Shlok agnihotri is really different!! 😆

And her seductiveness isn't gonna work on him! 😆

And counting from 100 backwards...

wow sach mein ulti ginti karna ko boldiya!! 😃🤣

Aur phirse Astha kisi ke upar gir gayi!!

Wow!! I mean so much for not doing it again!! 🤣

Fantabulous update!! 👏👏

Update the next part soon!!

btw thanks for the pm!!!

I know I haven't commented on previous parts and I am sorry for that! but you know I wasn't sure

if I was going to follow the story...

Don't get me wrong or anything I loved it since you started it but you know...

I was kinds hesitating!!

But anyway, now I have commented and I am pretty sure I am not gonna

miss any update! isi meina apne sene mein fevicol se chip ka liya he!! hhehhe 😆😉

so...

uNTIL later

Peace out!!!! 😎

Thank u for commenting!😛Nd no I completely understand ur hesitation,even U do dt quite often..😳But thank u agn!Da air conditioner scene was a last minute thought..Bt so glad u lykd it!😃

Originally posted by: .Siham.

awesomeee updatee yaaar :)

Thank you!😛

Originally posted by: sumana561

So she fell again...nice update.thanks for the pm.

Yes she did!😉Thank you!😛