Arshi OS: Forget Me Not ~ TY Note Page 48 - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story...
The way you have written is just fantastic...loved it !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, this was really really beautiful, u made me cry happy wala tears at the end ~ loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice os
it was really interesting and capturing




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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a wonderful OS. I'd be honest when I started to read I expected it to be painfully intense kind of story, ending in a happy note. But I wasn't at all disappointed the way it turned out to be. I loved it. It was an emotional piece but not the one that drains you out but instead leaves you grinning with awe.

I don't blame Arnav for what he was thinking of Khushi being a village girl. Don't we all, in this day and age want an accomplished life partner? So it was normal in his part. Although it became a bit harsh as he was blinded by prejudice. And then he fell in love with the person that she was. We love the person that one is and not their accomplishments. It does make us proud but doesn't affect the way we feel about them.

Half way through I kind of knew that Khushi was acting up. After all no matter how much she loved him there was only so much of insult she could take and mostly she would never want to be a forced burden upon him.

And the way you ended it was beautifully awesome. Now that she knows he loves her back and he has suffered without her, its natural and normal of her to forgive him and not fight him when they could start all over and be happy.

I absolutely loved reading this OS. I had a great time. Brilliant job.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a damn emotional Os. I had tears in my eyes wile reading d middle part

Bt somewere had a idea dat khushi must have heard him dats y she didnt wanna marry him

Nd see i was ryt..

She heard everythng nd bcz of she had a accident rest we knw

Bt i felt anger nd pity both on arnav..

Last part blew me off.

Wen she said d ring was loose frm strtng..

He ctchd it .. She did a mistake..

Nd how he strtd kissing her was ☺️ ☺️

He paid for wat wrng he did

I simply loved d OS ❤️

P.S would love to recieve PM frm u for updates 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written!!thanx for sharing with us!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres ed pg 53 .

Sorry fr ths late unres

n ..

I forgot who suggested me the os .. Lol

i guess it was farha ipkknd ... Thnk yu farha :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I actually had a tear rolling down for some reason
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! beautiful.. waiting for more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read this for the fifth or sixth time I guess... Ab jaldi se MKM 2 karo naa... Before I rave your whole index once again...

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