Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Nice n light hearted update.
So basically Arnav is jealous Khushi is not giving attention to him but to his family.

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Awesome update as well as story line

Last week came across this update

I like it especially your Khushi

She knew how to live happily.She is not trying to win his heart

If he don't want me, me too...

ASR ego hurt because she is not effected by him a lady not effected by hi so unusual

She is still luknowi girl but have attitude brings Khushi in RM

Arnav jealous of Akash really???

Lunch date superb

Anjali different too

Nk-Anjali a new pair???

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GunM

@GunM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

mind blowing update

Arnav is a clever man...always gets what he wants

cant wait to read about Khushi's plan

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

superb update...enjoyed reading ...

liked it the way u wrote about whole conversation between anjali and kushi, they share a specil bond liked it very much especially this line...
Anjali clapped her hands gleefully, spending time with her sweet bhabhi was second best stress reliever for her, seconded only by her time spent with Kavya. very very touchy...anjali is lucky to have kushi in her lonely life... they ignored arnav ,...learn arnav bet ego se kuch nahi melega...just realize what u have...i guess anjali is doing purposefully to teach arnav a lesson ...

anjali is getting strong and confident, i liked the way u wrote in her first day of her office...nk is there it will be sooo much fun...

liked it the way arnav teased kushi in front of anjali,can not wait to read about falling in love with each other...i guess soon arnav will be the first one fall for kushi...

thank u for the beautiful update...

cheers...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 12 years ago

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momb24

@momb24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Things are moving forward for both, hope both learn more about eachother. looking forward to the next chapter

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

great going...so the battle of the titans to show each other who is in charge starts..brilliant..bring it on

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

I love the way you're writing each of the characters! Your ASR at this point is truly...pathetic? Is that the right word?

I cannot wait to see Khushi put him down. But...something tells me that Khushi is going to be on the receiving end of Arnav's pettiness. Will he be happy seeing Khushi truly unhappy?

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john-angad

@john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

the title totally intrigued me and love it so far! so khushi is adopted ans always taken for granted, but things have changed! it was hilarious the way arnav forced her to hb]v lunch with him!

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

read this story in one go...
i must say it was absolutely wonderful...
loved the way u r portraying Khushi as understanding,matured yet intelligent girl who knows how to behave,when 2 behave and what 2 react...
even though she was not considered as her own daughter by amma and buaji she always manged to do her best nt 2 hurt anyone...
loved the way she accepted Arnav's initial behaviour and instead of being sad she saw the brighter side of it...she s everything a girl should be...he s nt allowing people 2 use her as puching bag...
she even made Anjali strong and realise her true potential...
loved the treatment she s giving 2 Arnav...waiting 2 see how Khushi makes Arnav pay for his small game...Arnav had really taken his family granted and Khushi's arrival made him realise that...
can u PM when u update?
it s truly wonderful story...
update soon...