Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11 - Page 34

Wonderful story.finished reading in one go with tears in my eyes.thanks

fab update ...

Your story is very interesting i really like it... so i'll be happy if you convert it to ff...
loved this updates specially Arnav's musing over literacy and the way he thought about his mother and the other ladies in his life his nani, mami... brilliantly written.
so anji all set to join office... loved khushi's reaction to her first day at office... lolz
will wait for next thanks :D

We can vote for its conversion into FF or SS but its upon U to keep our intrest intact in it with ur story n updates...U knw sometimes We want to read a story on n on but all good things have to come an end...Also Sometimes writer thinks that they have good story in their mind but they dont plan it out n unfortunatly they have to suffer writer's block...Then its WE readers who have to suffer...becoZ writer just leaves us hanging there or puts on A Hiatus note...
As far as this story is concerned i think It will be good if u convert it into FF,,what with all its diverse angles wrapping to and end,,this cant be done properly in a SS...I also hope U have whole story planned out in ur mind n u'll not leave us hanging there...
Coming towards Update..
It was good...We got to know more of Arnav's point of view...Khushi wants to b indepndnt...that's nice...i guess Anjali will surely take notice of Khushi's ambition...So Arnav Babua has started getting jealous...sirf thoraaa sa...wo b chale ga...aahista aahista ziada jealous b hone lg jaayen gay...
Waiting for next Update...

His memories of his Mother spoke of love care n good upbringing...that was nice to read...he has done background check on Khushi...that was very much like of AsR...:)

that is soo cute update i like it

hey nyc story line...a bit different...indifferent khushi towards arnav and a very much jealous and irritated and impatient arnav...who cant even snap out all he wants :D

Am fine the pace of the story..pls make it ff..

came across this FF