Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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Amita2014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Just read all the parts in one go.
The prologue is heart wrenching...

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priyanka1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Nice update
PM me next chapter

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Part 5
OMG that shyam ... 😡 but glad that he is out of the sight n in jain before kushi's entry
awesome part
lets see what is anjali goona do!!!!

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koisk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Loved the update, and do convert it to a FF.. Don't wrap it up...l

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Part 6

Hmmm tiny winy jealous arnav...interesting...nd hope soon it will be because of seeing kushi with some man😉
awesome part
and eagerly looking forward to the next one

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Jessie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

An interesting look into Arnav's mind.

I am thinking that Anjali will try to bring Arnav's mind around to before he became ASR and this is one way to go about it.

Khushi running around and being hyperactive was enjoyable!

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...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Another beautiful chapter. I think you're doing a wonderful job at writing this story. I did have some problem with Anjali for talking about herself in front of Arnav and totally forgetting Khushi Arnav's fight. But I'm sure you'll close the loops & not leave us hanging. Please unfold the story as you have planned. It's a treat to read your work. And please please please don't end this in a hurry just because of low response, this story is turning out beautifully. I hope you'll continue it with the same vigor :)

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Mkt2004

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Loved it! Specially the part where you write about wisdom. Literacy doesn't bring wisdom for sure. Don't we all meet enough highly literate people in this world who are illiterate in their thinking and actions. The literate, illiterates.

Looking forward to the next update, wouldn't mind if it turns into a FF.

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Beautiful update dear... Loved how Khuhsi was getting excited to send Anjali to office...😊... the atmosphere was too good...

Loved how you wrote it...

regarding the note... I was sooo happy when you converted that OS to SS, and will be the happiest person if you change it to a FF>.. Do take your time and wirte more updates.. Please don't try to finish it off soon...

Hope you will consider my request...

Amrita