Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Conversion into an ff deffo
Loved it

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

I am thoroughly enjoying myself. Beautifully written. I want it to last like ever... so make it a ff please.

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Nice portraying and fresh narration. I loved it. Regarding story, it is my suggestion please don't hurry to wrap it. If you feel your characters have much to say, please hang on. Don;t mind the number of comments. If you had written this while the show was on air you would have had 30times more responses. The number of visitors are less hence the response also dwindles. Write only for you, only for your story

Slow and steady wins the race :)

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Arshinme

@Arshinme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

I just caught up with your story ... I must say the prologue brought tears in my eyes...loved the progression of the story and I think Anjali will ask Khushi to assist her... Just a hunch...keep going...😊

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Really really nice update.

So Arnav admits that he was being paranoid unnecessarily.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Its such a beautiful story. Pls pls make. It into an FF. req of a die hard Arshi fan!. Thanks for the pm.

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Hi dear,

Read the last update and loved it. The story is very interesting and the thought that you plan to turn this into an FF is awesome. You have a unique style and love the way you present each and every character.

Good luck ⭐️

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

I have to be honest. I was slightly surprised and somewhat confused when I saw Anjali's point of view in chapter 5. I thought the focus would be on Khushi. Also,chapter 5 was the first time we saw something unrelated to Khushi occur. I wanted to see where you were going with it before I commented. As you continued, it looks like you have a interesting angle cooking up.

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Honestly I did feel a bit weird when the last chapter was about Anjlai..I guess all of us were hoping that Anjali will speak about Khushi and not about herself...

Anyways I do like that Anjali is trying to be independent..I hope that Khushi will also be able to stand on her own..

I wouldn't mind if you convert this into an FF with an apt ending ..