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Posted: 12 years ago
Make Me Love...
Will he make her love someone else or will she make him love her back??

Whatever the story be, destroyed/unconditional or make me love, I only want arhi together... So pls don't make Arnav drilling sense into her in the end but make him lose his sense and good judgement and fall for her... Plsss...

I liked the guy - NK, he was cute... And intelligent, practical and helpful... as soon as he got to know that she's not showing interest and likes some Mr. A, he backed out and also cleared her way by talking directly to Arnav to not force her and helped her in his own capacity, which khushi obviously won't realise and appreciate in her present state of desperation to make Arnav hers...

Khushi seems to lose control so easily in front of him, may be partially because she can't offend him and can't refuse him either and also she knows that its all in his hands, he has the final word and his verdict will decide her destiny... So she's desperately trying to make him see sense of what she wants and can't take out that pleading from her voice and eyes each time she discusses this with him cuz she knows she has to make him understand and accept her love for him and this relationship even when not only the world but he himself is standing as a barrier in her love story...

Arnav's condition must be so difficult right now... He would hv never thought that khushi wud ever propose marriage to him... Pls give us his pov too...
The way u r showing the difference in their personalities, and also their generation (well quite so) is commendable...
Arnav is the mature one, experienced, responsible and he knows what's good for khushi and wants the best for her... He wud never force her and cant see her crying... But he can't give her what she wants... He has to see it from all the angles as he is much elder to her and she is his and nani's responsibility... He can't be hard on her and she doesn't understand when he is being gentle and trying to reason with her... It must be so embarrassing for him to associate the three things together in a sentence - him, her and love...
And khushi, she is carefree, she knows just one thing that she loves him and that's what matters to her... She doesn't give a damn to others... She is so open and verbal about her feelings for him and expresses it so freely bringing out the stark difference between her and his personalities and ages... She is in love and desperately wants him to understand, accept and reciprocate her love... Arnav can't take her lightly cuz she's not a teenager crushing over him, she is an adult and knows what she's doing with her life... He is going to hv a tough time dealing with her as he can't be harsh with her, can't force her and also can't see her cry... and can't grant her her wish too... But how does he plan to stop her from making castles in the air, where she's already dreaming him and her together happily ever after...

I am actually loving this story, even though I was not so sure when I read the age difference, so I guess even Arnav will fall for her, what say?

So bring it on- all different shades of khushi - angry, caring, loving, jealous, planning, scheming, sweet, sour, mean, vulnerable, flirty - to make him love her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i get khushis feelings but she cant make arnav see her in that light if he has literally raised her!!! poor nk!
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Posted: 12 years ago
😕 You are holding up something
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Posted: 12 years ago
im loving the turns of event but ur arnav is like a mystery to me! for sure he cares for her and a lot, anyone can see that but does he love her?? i think he might do but there is something him that is not allowing him to include khushi in his life as a life partner! maybe something or someone from the past! im wondering if he realising wat he is asking for by asking her to get married! he wont be seeing everyday like now, she will be belonging to another family as well. i personally think he is not ready for all this dramatic changes!

im so happy that khushi is fighting for her love and her happiness! if she thinks he is the one then im sure all this pain and fight will be worth in the end!

n love is something that no one has any control over! u cant chose who to love and who not to. just like khushi cant control her heart and program it not to beat for arnav anymore!

n nk im grateful for his behavior. atleast now arnav can see that khushi is damned serious about her love!

khushi's breakdown broke my heart! it was so emotional:((

loved this update! it was just mind blowing! super eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Honestly I never thought I would ever like the concept of such a huge age difference. But hats off to you, you actually "Made Me" love it. The way you described Khushi's feelings for Arnav over the years, in the last part, was amazingly beautiful. I just can't seem to wait for him to fall in love with her love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I've already started waiting for the next chapter.

Type fast my tortoise.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lazy...its time to b busy😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 4

Well I knew it that...he is going to deny her and she will be heart-broken!

I have never hated NK figure in any of the FF's but I think I am hating him here.. and reason is obvious!

The way you described her feelings, during her teenage days..was awesome. Felt like reading my own thoughts about someone I used to crush on during my school days.. lolz

Well it was an amazing read..

Now off to read chapter 5
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very cute part... and I have made another banner for this.. will send you after I post my comment!
So, looks like NK is harmless? well I still have doubts left. But he managed to convey everything to Arnav. and loved the cute moments and dialogues at the cafe.

Love the poem!

Waiting for next part.

I was mildly MIA.
But now I am back..get ready for some real spamming hehehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thanx a lot for the pm!! really liked the update!! NK is so nice he undestud her n now wants her happiness!! KHUSHI is so deeply in love wid her MAN!! she honestly loves him a lot!!

Her imagination power is very strong (HUGGING FROM BACK-WAIST) 😳 😳 😳 😉 😉 😉 😉

it must b difficult for him too bt i wanna know the reason for his rejection????????????? 🤢🤢🤢

do update sooon m waiting eagerly for the update!!

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