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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: riafna

Victims of the molest and rape. We can't understand stand their state of mind.

Awesome concept.
Well written.
Thanks for pm.

We can't, we can just understand the fear because we all feel that with the way things are going unpleasantly around us.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

a very sensitive topic...even i was too felt umm sorta helpless and angry when i got to know about the conviction...we wont ever be able to feel the pain but we still feel the fear because of such weak and paralyzed justice system...beautifully written...thanks for sharing...


We all feel the same. Everybody I talk to is of the same opinion that we need stronger laws.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was beautifully written.
What Shyam did.😡
But nevertheless, thank god Khushi found Arnav.
And he'll be there for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

it was so beautiful ! :')
loved how khushi tried to move on from her horrendous past and arnav helping her take her first steps..

its so sad to see girls, whose only fault was to fall prey to those animals, suffer throughout their life and the criminals, hardly any of them just serving few years in jail, rather months and then leading a normal and not to forget, happy life!!
whats more concerning is to be aware of human trafficking happening in every corner of the country and girls being subjected to such cruelty throughout their life and we, the common people being helpless and not being able to help them out , our law and order being as they say 'andha kanoon' and police, the helpless creatures!

not everyone is as lucky as khushi to have a man like arnav in their life. im so happy for her and wish she remains all through her life :)

thanx for writing such a lovely piece on this issue and for the pm.
kepping pm-ing me whenever you update! 😃


Such incidents are indeed very horrible and no punishment can remove the horrible memories off the mind of the victim. And these are not a result of present but it has been happening in our past too, the only difference is that victims want to fight, they want justice.
You are right that not everyone gets a Arnav to support them but support and compassion goes a long way in the healing process.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: NidhiNev

Why the APPREHENSION !!!!???!! This is a brilliant OS depicting whats happenning now-a-days ! These guys dont realise the aftermath of what the girl goes through. Broken beyond repair, mistrust every person of the opposite sex, go into a cocoon, forget to smile.. In a way they stop living, just a lifeless body moving around doing things or just sitting in a corner unable to trust again !

Hey ! You made ASR talk such alot. Khushi popping up in his mind had become a custom thing for him ... Lol

Khushi ran out of his Arnav's cabin straight into the washroom and broke down crying ! Why ? Was my first reaction ! Did they know each other from before itself and he didnt recognise her and then thought must hv got partial amnesia or something...that is why she was apprehensive / uncomfortable to be infront of him , of him being around her !

But slowly lost in her work and slowly interacting with Arnav, Khushi started becoming a bit calm and friendly. She saw to it that everything she had worked on for the fashion show went well.

Atlast out of alot of persuasion from Arnav, Khushi looking ravishing attending the after show party. The party which she had point blankly refused. So sweet of Arnav ! Kuddos to you arnav !

Sitting in the garden on the bench, both Arnav and Khushi shared their past ! Why ? Oh Arnav had fallen in love with Khushi ! WOW ! I mean really WOW !!

Khushi on the other hand did not respond in the positive. Instead she just told him no and that Arnav would take back his words once he learnt about her past ! Arnav was so understanding and told her to carry on telling him what happened that she hesitated.

Shyam and Khushi were in love and engaged ??!!?! God Khushi and Snakewa !?! *knowing grin* but Shyam is Shyam ! How can he be a nice person !

I really hate these Double Standard people who think that once engaged the female is their property and can do anything and the female has to listen !

Well Shyam was no different from one of those and forced himself on Khushi ! Shyam now was serving a 3year sentence. According to me should have gone in for longer time.

Knowing all this, Arnav's heart and love increased and went all for Khushi, whom he embraced calming her down, feeling her pain. All Khushi saw was Pure Love in Arnav's eyes... Pure Love, compassion, determission !

To think of it.. How such victims would love to have a partner who would understand and love her !

Tk cr...keep writing Aayat !


First of all thank you for sharing your thoughts both on the issue and this story. This is such a sensitive topic and there was this constant thought at the back of my mind of not doing complete justice to it - That's why the apprehension.
When Khushi is keeping quiet Arnav has to say something to make her speak.
Those incidents regarding her hesitation were the only I could write keeping in mind the effect of such a horrible incident. For me these can be the signs of people dealing with different kind of trauma and which we sometimes forget to pay attention to because we are too busy in our own lives -specially domestic violence and abuse in case of couples.
I think that a person who has experienced such tortures will be suspicious of not only others but themselves. Isn't this what our society makes to believe them - she wears such kind of clothes, she goes to pub, she roams around with guys!! there are n number of irrational thoughts going in the mind of people, sadly ladies included.
To have someone who can understand surely goes a long way.
Once again thank you so much. :-)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
beautiful
heart touching os.. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the os loved that she did not let that monster keep wining but came back started to design started to live she just needed to get the pain out of her system and started to trust again and the bas***d only got 3 years hell if it was up to me i would have him killed along with child abusers and child rapist loved that you showed her trying to live again but that smile really does never reaches her eyes loved that she talked to arnav and he told her why he care and how he was going to be their loved it awesome keep writing and send me pm loved it thanks for the pm and the os

Thank you so much. Well our laws give 7 years imprisonment in rapes, so attempt can't have more than 3 years. Frankly in a case like this, as in my story, an accused can go free too what with they being engaged and the girl being gone on her own wish with him in the room. A person could easily get false alibis to prove his innocence, like they tried in Nirbhaya case. Laws, sadly, can easily be twisted. I wanted to be little more hopeful of our justice system and hence 3 years. And I wish such people can get life imprisonment or death for ruining someone's life, for shaking their very basic foundation.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

The story was beautiful. A journey of sorts.

But more beautiful was the idea behind it. The rape case disgusts me for the principle reason that it tells the youth of the country to go commit crimes, as long as they are under 18 they will be spared 😡

About the story, we can only imagine Khushi's horror. Thankful to the gods to have granted Khushi her Arnav who is her supporting boss, firm friend and now a tender lover 😊


Thanks a lot.
Same here, they can commit crime and go free on the basis of being minor. And when a 6 yr old minor gets raped by a 44 year old man, the elder panel of the city/village decides to get her married to the 8 yr old boy of the same rapist. A girl's virtue, choice has seemingly lost its value. The judgement in Nirbhaya case has quite shaken me. I know its wrong but still I can't stop myself from doubting every minor now as if they can be capable of such heinous crime. Our security system, justice has failed me. And this insecurity was the idea behind this story because I couldn't stop myself from thinking that how these victims learn to live normally after living such horrible nightmares.
I wish every girl has a Arnav in her life, who understand his partner, considers her equal and cares for her without breaking her trust ever.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
man those statistics are scary right
ahhh so this is what got her this scared of things
well men mostly
but she did decide to give herself another chance
you are right we cant know what it feels like to be in place of people like khushi
but hope that such things instead of being on the rise lessen
maybe one day it will be safe for us women every where and hope that day does come
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
love the story and arnav such a loving character

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