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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome one

The cncpt itself had so much

I hve always hated shyam yucckk how could he do smthng like dis wid his own grlfrnd cum future wife

Poor khushi suffered lot bcz of him

but glad as always arnav came as a ray of hope, as a ray of light in her life

Kyunki i love u damnit the awesomest line

Khushi dnt u trust me dis lines always had a impact

Loved it

Thnku so much for writing it

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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88sandy

@88sandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

wow such a beautiful os it was...

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aquagal

Kash hum IPKKND ko undo kar pate!!! (IPKKND promo style)
Per dil hai ke manta nahi ab kisi aur show ko yeh pehchaanta nahi... 😆

Mohabbat towards IPKKND door jaane na de...

I miss my show! 😔

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Beautiful OS. I loved how sensitive you were towards Khushi's feelings, and the positive note in which you ended it. Strength and hope, thats what keep one going, right?

Thanks for the PM 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

What a lovely story.

Arnav is a sweetheart, bu Shyam only got three years!

Even our law is so unfair!

And thanks Nivvi, for the reommendation.

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Nice OS.. Thanks Nexus_13 for sharing the link!

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Beautifully written dear. You did very well with writing emotions. You drew each readers inside Khushi head and felt her pain and grief. My heart broke for her but I believe Arnav will heal her one day at a time...

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Very beautifully written, loved it.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Thanks to Nexus 13 for recommending it.

What a brilliant topic you have chosen? A problem that needs to be addressed and every platform plays an important role.

Marital rape is not a crime in many countries. Same could be said when one is in a relationship too. When they try to take advantage and the girl is accused of putting herself out there. People need to understand the importance of understanding the meaning of 'NO!'. A no is no no...

I really enjoyed the way you built the story. The instant attraction between the two and Khushi resisting it all the way because of her terrible experience. This Arnav was outstanding. so understanding. Who wouldn't want him? who can resist him? Not Khushi and she is lucky. He will help heal her :)

Thank you!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: aquagal

Thank you dear. I remember how one incident, conviction reversed the whole look of the matters we discuss.
The sad part is rapes are still happening repeatedly without a fail. There is no state untouched by this filth.
Laws are really bad and in such cases they seem helpless.
Keeping fingers crossed for our wish to come true. Life can be a bit simple with this. There are already other problems each of us face in our day to day lives, lets eve-teasing, molestation, rapes not be one of them.
A support is needed in such cases and Arnav was that here.
PS: This is not the one I was writing. I wrote it after I started writing that. But these thoughts didn't let me think about anything else.

I am glad you come up with this concept.. and who knows better than me.. when we get tortured by all this sicknes around us...

it was an amazing story with an amazing lesson..

Hope to read the next one from you... hopefully very soon!😳