ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 15

To tell u the truth...m regretting why I read this chapter now...I really shouldn't hv. After having read it...now m dying to read about next happenings immediatly...only if I could make u write the next chapters this very minute. U tell me how do I focus with this last update being on auto-repeat on my mind...thnk God! my exams r still 5 days away.

Linny, really how do u do it? after every update...nd I mean every damn update...I m even more curious to read the next one. This last update was quite poerfully delivered.

I liked how u wrote of the opposing forces of nature through these lines-
As he walked towards the vision, the winds blew louder and harder as though opposing his approach but the rustling leaves cluttered on the ground were blown aside for him to find a clearer path to the immobile figure.

About crumpling the parchment, even though I agree with lordy's fear bcz of his dream, but shouldn't the content of parchment made him happier too somewhere? Shouldn't it hv enlightened him a bit on confirming words of Lady Anjali tht Khushi indeed likes to stay with him?

offcourse loved the way the decision was made, the smiling khushi before she knocked on door, the accusing words, shattering of expectations, crashing to reality, the silent cry and the rebounding resolutness...evrything was just perfect with jst the right amount of strokes of power delivered.

however, I still quite connect the chess-queen to the update...if it is right time to ask for it...plz do let me know wat it meant?

very well written Linny! I really really feel proud once agn...tht m following this tale. thank u for it!

P.S. I totally second u on the fact tht any story loses its charm once a couple accepts of its love to the other person. And I think IPKKD itself can be used as one such example. We all loved the tale with few ups and downs offcourse until they finally got married last year this same time. But, after thtthe story went down the hill for me, besides the reveleation about Shyam.
And not only IPk...but I too feel tht ur observations holds true in all cases.

Originally posted by: revathy85

I read the story in one go its awesone I love the way you portrayed each and every charcter

Great update
Hmm so Arnav decided to become cold again to save Khushi from himself because of his dream
So in hatred we started in hatred we end, impact ful line although I wouldn't want it to be like that
Poor Arnav doesn't know how to shed his tears of pain

u right sometimes routine becomes boring but rest assured not with this one...my heart goes to arnav mostly here the poor guy/beast is really scared for her...two bad omen in one night would make anyone in abad situation...sleep will surely not be in his mind loved it line

Originally posted by: sarahehsan

Hey Revathy! :)

Glad to have you here! Are you new here? I'm not sure but if you are, I'd like to welcome you on behalf of our Narrator Sahiba and all the other comrades of our beloved tale. Usually our dear member, Soul takes care of welcoming all the new members who gather at the inn, I hope I'm allowed to do so, for once.. 😉

'Rabba Ve!' is how we greet each other when we all gather to Lin's beautiful hooking narration and even when she's not there, we greet each other the same. So, Rabba Ve to you dearest! :)

I'm not a frequent one to comment but I welcome you and hope to see you often on the thread. 😊

Originally posted by: Aquiline

Sarah, dear! You do not know how happy I am to see you on the Thread! Instead of sitting silently among the crowd of my dear readers...Ofcourse, you can welcome revathy. (Revathy, we have another revathy in our circle too).

And for the notice of all my dear readers, when there is nothing much happening in the Inn, you can always pay a visit to the Cottage where the Comrades will be eager to greet you...and sometimes, the Storyteller might also peep into the Cottage for a little tea and cake...

Cottage Room 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chat-clubs/3741787/circle-of-the-arhasian-comrades-tb-and-tbr-thread-16

I came across this story around the end of July 2 months back and i'm commenting now. I just LOVE this FF and it is now on Top of my favorite FFs. Seriously I was left spell bound after reading each chapter.I really feel as if i'm sitting in a cave listening to the story Your story is so pure and everything is perfect. And to top of it I love the fairy tale theme,its unique.

as i saw the title ''back to square one'' i was like 😔



and after reading it i was
kew daard hain itna tere update main ???? raabaa veyyy