ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 17

Beyond expectations Lin. .you are just amazing. .cant wait to read the next part:-)

awe you made me cry beautifully written...loved the updates...hope tehy find happiness soon

Beautiful update...their journey is like one stop front and two steps back...
When will they find solace...
Wonderful update...thanks for the pigeon

Oh no..this is so sad! That dream o Arnav gave him a jolt of reality that he is capable of putting others in harms way and while he was being lenient and allowing himself to enjoy being content with Khushi, he knows he is not a normal man; there are consequences to his moves and what's worse is that he ends up harming the ones he lives more than suffering those con quenches on himself :/

And because of this, he can't afford to let Khushi come near him; even if he tears him apart and takes away the only peace he has been able to find, he's willing to suffer that in place of keeping Khushi out of harms way...

Ohh there is so much symbolism here too with the condition of Khushi form in Arnav's dream and how she appears after he slams the door on her...and the rose bush...and how Arnav blows out the lone candle submerging the room and possibly himself into darkness...hmm...many to ponder over till the next update...

Ohh and I liked the note at the end and completely agree that a story does loose some pizazz and interest once the leads have their confessions...it's the buildup to that makes the story and I love that this story despite showing Arnav and Khushi married, still leaves a complete sense of excitement and thrill for what is to come! :D

Rabba vey
Foolish man n his foolish dimag... Stupid stupid Lordy when will he get that the beast in him always calmed down when there wass his biwi's presence...
Oh my poor lil angel,she was soo happy to be with him,but what he got,that was a hurtful moment for you,even for us too ...but on the otherside of the door his heart is bleeding too...n one day u will knw it...the reason why he is doing thid,cz he want you to protect frm himself... .but r u gng to stay away frm,can u do that,really????and u hate him?????did I heard clearly?????? Lin fabulous update...

chapter 187
Awesome update... Khushi woke up with a content feeling as if she been loved at night probably from distance but hey isnt it true first lady ji u indeed wete loved most parts of the night 1st in HIS thoughts and then with his eyes. Loved this part. so u got the letter from ur family ah nice khushi. Her reaction was beautifully described. but how sad she had to wait for her jiji to come n read the letter with her. Lol so true was Anjali in her saying For wait is not Khushi's forte but the time will show dat she will wait for her husband to believe her n love her as she deserves. Poor Khushi has to buried herself in work so tht her heart mind n hand could stay away from the tempting letter the words of which were from the heart of their loved ones. Finally Payal came with Mami. Mami bought everything which Payal selected well thts a news. The letter was beautifully written showing the emotions of family so well. Garima's condition made my eyes tear up. Poor woman... buaji's p.s, pps, ppps n so on made me laugh n remember our dear Sanu at the same time. Now didnt the words tht Lordy doesnt even allow hhis wife to cuddle him. hahaha whts crying over spilt porridge Lol nice example but explanation eww ok so Khushi should control her banter coz it really will cause problem some day. lol true it is Lady Manorma is not tht tough nut to crack as compared to Lordy. And in the end Khushi remembered her dream n I just loved these lines
"Worry not, Nani, the game is only
about to begin. And for this game, I
will make the rules."
just loved the update

I actually agree with you, a happy ending cannot be a part of the story, its gotta be the end and this is exactly what went wrong with our show, they rushed to the remarriage way to early. They could've sorted out Shyam properly, they could have shown Babuji recovering, they could've shown Arnav's repentance and Khushi acting pricey. They could have worked on the characters per say. Developed them and then ended the story.

awesome update...feeling very bad for Khushi..well written..continue soon...😊

Chapter 187: The Letter from the Village

As usual too good update
Perfect reflection of buaji's personality in her letter.. Jovial & Wise.. loved it!!

... but she felt so overjoyed for no recognizable reason- as though she been loved and admired for a long time...probably at a distance.

Aaahhaa... you never miss to leave that special kind of smile on my face, linny!

Little moj-masti of sister is delighted and what a start of latter.. super like it..!!

"Well..." Payal tried to defend her forte, "Cuddling my husband is one matter, but imagine Buaji cuddling yours..."

Ha ha ha... if it happens so there would million dolloer expression of Lordy..!

There is nothing one gains from sitting with a sour face on. Life turns its tables, and you need to turn yourself round as well or it would be impossible to reach the dish. You get what I mean, girls?

Linny at her best to give life lesson... Fab..!!

We can only consider the prospect of licking it off the table and we cannot consider even that if the table is not clean enough.

Uff... rest every thing was fine but this one was heavy buaji... I read twice, thrice even four times but I still doubt I understood it!! Khushi did you get that?

Waiting impatiently for that day,

Ouch.. if their husbands are also going to accompany them in staying then we all too waiting impatiently...

P. P. P. P. P. S. I am stopping this letter now in all certainty before Master Happy also comes into the house and adds another P. P. S. to the train of P. P. S.s the letter is already tailed with.

Linny ki jai ho...!!!

Buaji.. did our sanu (reader Sansu) dear give you the idea of not stop train of P.P.P.P.P.P.S.s?

"Nani breaks all the rules, Kushi!" she announced and Nani frowned childishly, "They are the rules of my time. This generation knows nothing of how classy and perfect chess rules had once been!"

Oye naughty nani...!

Kushi's eyes shone cleverly, "It would most certainly have to be my very mysterious husband."

Words Highlighted nly for Shassy - the jaani dushman to pay attention. *wink*

Kushi added hastily, "I meant I am trying to find ways to get him to soften a bit."

Soften a bit in context of...?? Ok I stoped my sane mind *tongue out with wink*

Kushi frowned and, reaching out her hand, moved a white pawn towards the fallen king.

The one who don't know anything about chess even though this line touched to her heart & mind, then it says a lot about your writing linny...
You mentioned defeated & fallen king & then white pawn moved towards king..
are you pointing that he is already defeated by... his past? And khushi is going towards him, to be with him, to start the game, to make him win and stand strong.

"Worry not, Nani, the game is only about to begin. And for this game, I will make the rules."

JUST LOVED THIS LINE...!!

Chapter 188: Back to Square One

Gripping Start, it was..!
Lordy scared of what his own half could do to khushi... my heart goes for him..!!

Kushi was on her way to the stairway to head for Lord Arnav's room when Lady Anjali stated, "Stay in my room until he comes."

Why did she say that?

Chotey, if you come late and do not find your wife in your room, know that she is in my room. Dotake her to your room for it seems she prefers to spend her night with you than with me.

Ohhh I got my answer here...

I can't let it happen, he banged his fist on the table and then resumed his frantic pacing up and down the room. Suddenly he stopped near the window and, despite there being no moon to light the outside world, his eyes easily picked out the silhouette of the tall rose bush. He closed his eyes as a fresh wave of memories washed over his mind, more horrible than the dream he was trying to forget.

How could you, every time, be successful to create more n more inquisitiveness in your reader's mind by same unrevealed past?

He looked away to settle his disturbed stupor and his eyes instantly fell on the book before him, standing out among the other books in the shelves, because something was protrude from within its pages.

It felt good if I look at it as his mom (rose bush) directed him to khushi (handkerchief).. as if "don't look at past my dear son, see where is your future is"

Till she who burns with youth, and knows no fixed lot, is bound
In spells of law to one she loathes? and must she drag the chain
Of life in weary lust? (Blake's Visions, 5.21-3)

Wanna write what I felt but not getting words.. sorry!!

And that Kushi! His hands fisted on the arms of his royal chair. How dare she keep coming to me, despite knowing how dangerous I could be! What is that girl playing blind for! Always trespassing into my territory with no fear or care for her own safety.

I love this part of solo conversation...

The threat must become the shield. I will have to use myself against her.

Ohh Vo usse darayega... Oye.,.chal koi nahi yeah bhi koshish kar ke dekhle.. Vaise bata deti hoon kuch hone wala hain nahi...!!

... Then she reasoned to herself that she had been asleep and it was not right to judge him by what she had not seen. He must have come and left, finding me asleep...

Ooo... Come here khushi let me hug you...

Smiling, she knocked graciously.

It doesn't take even fraction of sec to our heart to start dreaming, hoping & wishing... isn't it!!!

"Who else do you want to sleep with?" his eyes glinted angrily.

With YOU.. you stupid...!!

"You will never understand me, Kushi," he glared at her, "We are two worlds apart. A lord is always a lord, and a beggar always a beggar."

Ah.. his words are hurting... him too!!

Kushi breathed in, the ...I don't think I can hate you even more than I hate you now..."

"I have always hated you, Kushi. Always," he asserted coldly, "So much so that I never want to see your impoverished face again!"

To whom both of you are telling this haan??
Kisse bewkoof bana rahe ho yaar...

And with that she turned and stumbled back to Lady Anjali's room. I will never weaken again or my words of wrath will have been in vain. She was determined. In hatred we began, in hatred we remain...

You have not idea how much I loved that line...holds so much than just anger...!!

Oooh... that was one fab update... just as you said "Back to square one"

Minute details & innovative writing... you are so good yaar...

"Yes, I'm fine," Lord Arnav cleared his throat again and stepped towards the tall table near the window upon which where a jug of water and an upturned glass. He poured himself some water and gulped it down hastily. Then, placing the glass down, he turned and nodded to Lord Akash, "Let's leave."
Holding it before him, he frowned at the red embroidery in its center, a red heart that confusedly looked like a red rose. Immediately, he remembered how the handkerchief had come to be there and who it belonged to...
• Tears stung in her eyes but they refused to fall down her cheeks for her anger surpassed her pain.

I am not sure this is the best time to come out with this song or not.. but i hope it is right fit...
This song always leaves its impact on me and started flowing with it mood does matter how happy, cheerful i was...
Hope you all like it...

BG for Khushi (click on play to listen)

Enjoy
H
Soul

Ok, again arnav is pushing khushi away, but this time, for her safety...