D3 (A new FF, as I imagined) COMPLETED(15/07 /14) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, Thnx to all of u for appreciating my effort. It means a lot to me. Next Update below.

Episode- 6

At late night, Sharon calls Swayam

Sharon : Hi, You ok?

Swayam - Ya , & you ?

Sharon : ya, fine.

Swayam- I am so sorry, Sharon. That hivam has created allthis problem. Our friends misunderstood you. & I simply can't defend you. I am so so so so sorry.

Sharon : Why are you saying sorry? I know that I along with my feelings am complicated , but I can understand that , with so many problems together, anybody can get disturbed. So, it's ok. First, there were rumours, then you can't even stood with your sister, when she need you the most, then Shivam & Taani being together, then rehearsals, renovations, not able to perform in Footloose, friends misunderstanding me, Rey's suspension orders, & now this revealation. Oh God...it's so frustrating..

Swayam : Wow, how thoughtful. When have you started thinking so deeply?

Sharon : Well, you know, a person whose boyfriend is so sorted out , matured, intense, deep thinking, cool , supportive , & sooo cute, she is bound to develop certain positive qualities .

Swayam: Wow, so you have finally started 'Critical Analysis of Swayam Shekhawat'

Sharon : Now that I am complicated, so it's natural for me to do 'critical' analysis instead of the 'normal' one.

Both started laughing .

Sharon : Finally you laughed.

Swayam : Now that your oh-so-cute girlfriend is trying so hard to make you laugh, so it's normal to laugh, right.

Sharon : Ok. Now tell me, how is Taani ? The way she acted today, is just so unlike her. I was simply shocked with her behaviour today. It was so matured. She controlled her emotions, collected evdences, & then inform us. Simply awesome.

Swayam : Ya, she acted very strong today. She need some time, to get back to normal state. Even after she returned home, didn't spoke to me that much.

Sharon : Don't worry , everything would be fine. Be positive.

Swayam : Ya , now that all misunderstanding were cleared, I think now everything would be fine.

Sharon : If you are with me, we will face all problems & solve them together. I will try & understand others point of view as well & will definitely try to change myself.

Swayam : Nooo. You are fine this way. There is no need to change. Afterall, in this way only we can compliment each other. If you are impulsive, I will behave sorted out. We will handle things together, don't worry.

Sharon : Ok, so now don't tell me that you would start analysing my nature.

Swayam : Do you want it?

Sharon after thinking for some time: Ok, you can go on.

Swayam: Ok. Since you are impulsive, it's good as you follow your heart. Whatever you do, it's from your heart. Your immaturish behaviour adds charm to your nature. You don't have to be a deep thinker, you know I am there to serve that purpose.

Sharon :See this is what I am talking. You always find out positive things in my flaws. Will you always be this supportive?

Swayam : Obviously dear

Sharon : & if I do a mistake, you will make me understand, right?

Swayam : Surely

Sharon : Always will pamper me ?

Swayam: Haaa baabaa

Sharon :You will never leave me ?

Swayam: Nopei

Sharon :Ok fine . Good night

Swayam : Excuse me. One moment, you are all romantic & now , Good night? Like seriously?

Sharon : Ya Good night. If I don't sleep now, I'll get dark circles. & so I can't compromise with my sleep. So, Good night .

Swayam : Ok, honey, love u, gud nt, sweet dreams, muaaahhh

Sharon : Lov u too

Sw: What , did you just say, what I heard you say ?

Sharon :(realized) : Ya, so?

Swayam : Fine honey. You have to admit it face to face

Sharon : Will think about it. Now bye & Good night

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome update
swaron phone convo superb
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ASWOM UPDATE
SWARON PHONE COVO WAS SUPARB...
PLZ NEXT ME TAAYAM BONDING...
ND UPDATESOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update ...
sworan phone talk lovely and cute ...
update soon ... big update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Episode - 7

Rey was thinking of all the events & was thinking about Taani. He felt the urge to call her, but thought of giving her some time to get back to normal.



Next day, whole gang met at Canteen.

Rey asked Swayam,'How is Taani ? Is she alright?

Neha also added,' Ya, Neha thinking the same.

Team also continued,' Exactly. So many revelation & that too at the same time. We toh can't even digest the whole things & she had to face he whole thing.

At that time, Taani entered the canteen. Everybody looked at her.

Taani said,' So, you guys are already here. Good. It's better, I should go & give all the eveidences to VP sir .

Taani leaves & went to VP's cabin. She shows all the proof to VP. VP sir calls AVP mam, the whole team & also Shivam to his cabin.

Everybody arrived at his cabin.

Shivam (seeing all these, got very shocked). He shouts at Taani,' What proof, do you have, that I was behind all these things ?

Taani replied coolly,'Shivam, for once, let's believe that you are not responsible for hiding the approval letter of Mr Rai Prakash. But college IT department has confirmed that the IP address from which, all these rumours were posted, is of your laptop's . At the same time, the CCTV camera that has been installed in the canteen is also connected to your laptop. This has also been confirmed by IT people . Now, do you need any further proof? VP sir have seen the foodfight footage, not to forget, the original version & he knows that it was nothing serious.

VP: Look Shivam, we all know the truth. So please shut your mouth. Rey , you can join your responsibilities today itself. Taani, just inform the students that election has been withdrawn Shivam, if Taani wanted, she would have put everything infront of the students. But she decided to keep it between us only. Whatever , issues you have with team, sort it out between yourselves. Now, all of you please leave.


Outside VP's cabin,

Taani said,'Shivam, if you want to give any kind of explanation, give it to the team, & let them decide, what they want to do with you & guys , please keep me out of this.

Shivam opposed,'But Taani, I am your boyfriend. How could you leave me ?

Taani said,''Oh , puleeez Shivam, stop it. Entire team knows the truth, so there is no need to pretend.

When team confronts Shivam, he shows all his frustration as in the story. Hearing all this, team decides to give him a 2nd Chance, but Shivam decided to leave by saying sorry individually to all team members & especially to Taani.

Taani went to put the 'election is withdrawn' notice.

Team said,' Guys Taani need some time. It's better, we should give her some space.

Swayam agreed,'Ya guys, let's go

Sharon suddenly said,' Guys, don't you think , we should celebrate? Like, all the problems in our lives, just get solved, this calls for a celebration guys.

Teams members agreed,'Ha yaar, party toh banti hain'

Sharon suggested, they should plan a weekend trip as would be refreshing for team especially Taani

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago
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Episode - 8

Team started planning.

Simmi asked Swayam, 'Taani should have updated the students about the changes till now. But where is she? It's quite a long time'

Swayam agreed.

Other team members concluded, may be she was upset with all the recent happening, so might need space. So, they continued their planning.

Rey left from there (as he can guess the possible places where Taani can go. )





In the Fire Escape, Taani was sitting upset

Rey entered fire escape. Seeing Taani, he asked,' You Ok?

Taani stood up & replied,' ya, I am fine. You here?

Rey said,' I was actually looking for you to check ... whe...whether you are Ok. You wanna talk?

Taani replied instantly,' Right now, no.

Rey took a deep breathe & after some moments pause replied in a polite tone,' If you want , you can cry. You know, crying is a great stress buster. Sometimes, we can't cry infront of known people, thinking what they might think of us. But we can cry , infront of others we are not related to , without caring what they might think of us. So, just cry your heart out.Trust me, you will feel better.


After some moments Taani started crying softly. Slowly she cried her heart out.

Rey just supported her by hugging her. He don't want her to stop.He just wants to release all her pain by this process. He hold her tight , so that she don't fall, & let her cry.

Emotions are very complex & relationships are further more complex. Sometimes, we don't understand all our emotions. Between Rey & Taani, it's just the same. Rey is not in love but at the same time he doesn't hate Taani as well. There is no feeling of attraction or admiration, but at the same time he is concerned & he cares for Taani. Forgetting first love & getting into a new relation is not easy. It's neither friendship nor love. But something that lies between these two strongest emotions on earth. This nameless emotion is equally stronger like friendship or love & the relationship which this emotion is leading to is equally stronger like BFF, B/F or G/F . It is something which can neither be expressed by words nor cannot be explained to others. But can be felt by those who are going through the same kind of emotions . it is not something that is straight but rather very complicated & strong felt by the persons involved in it. The future of this relationship is not known to anybody or whether there is any future, that is also unknown. Whether this relation will take any other form , that is also a big question. Only time can give answer to all these questions. So, we all have to wait for the perfect time.


SCROLL DOWN FOR EPISODE 9 & 10

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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veryy nic update


loved it...

u r a great writter...

last update me jo likha ha wo aswom ha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update ...
chapter 8 really awesome and super ...
update soon
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Episode - 9

It's a bright Thursday. All arrives at college.

Sharon addressed team members who arrived at the canteen,' See guys, footloose is over & all misunderstandings were sorted out . Rey has resumed his responsibilities & Shivam also left the college. So, finally we are free from all problems. We also don't have any competition nearby , so let's go for a weekend trip. So guys think nah. where can we go?

Everyone starts discussing


At that time Taani & Rey arrives.

Taani hearing Sharon's plan said,'' Guys, there is another good news. Our Management along is planning to launch new courses in our College. For that reason, they will be having two days meeting along with trustees. Additionally, they were also in touch with few professionals of those field, so there is a chance of new faculties being recruited. So, they have announced a two days holiday.'

Sharon said,' Wow guys...that's a great news. Let's do one thing, we should start early in the morning tomorrow'

Rey interrupted,'' Fine guys, in that case, boys will be staying with me tonight'

Sharon also got excited,'Fine, then girls at my place'

Neha asked,'Guuuys. Our destination is not yet decided.

Everybody starts suggesting different places. Sharon looked at Taani & Rey & cocked her eyebrows seeking their suggestion.


Both replied at the same time,' Whatever you say. '

After more discussion, it was decided, that they would travel to Lonavala, after all it's monsoon time.


Boys starts murmuring,'From when did they have started thinking alike?

Hearing this Taani get little flustered , so she makes an excuse & left.

After all the planning, whole team decides to go to Mahabaleswar. First it'sa hill station, secondly there was a waterfalls nearby named Dhobi. So, it would be just perfect. All of them decided to leave by Rey & Sharon's car. At first they decide, girls should stay in Sharon's place & boys in Rey's place. But Taani has to finish some official work. Besides, she forget her laptop at home., So all of them decided to stay at Swayam's place. & as it is Swayam's place , so Vishaka will also have no problem to stay over there & girls convince Sharon to stay over there. (As they were unknown of Swaron trial relationship)






At night, girls were busy in Taani's room gossiping whereas boys are planning about their pranks that can be done in the trip. Taani was not comfortable with the idea of Rey being at her house as she doesn't want her emotions to get stronger & face another heartbreak all over again. So, she decided to maintain a distance with Rey.

On the other hand, Rey was confused as he can't understand why Taani pretended to be with Shivam, though she gave an excuse but he was not satisfied.



Kaka calls everybody for dinner.At the dinner table, Swayam & Sharon share lots of secret glances towards each other which didn't gone unnoticed by Taani. So, she decided in her mind. to do all possible things to make her dearest brother & Sharon, a couple. Finally, one love story should be on track.

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago
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Episode - 10

After dinner, Rey decided to talk to Taani alone. So, when all left for their assigned rooms, Rey called Taani.


Taani first gets uncomfortable. Then decides, she can't ignore the situation, so she had to face it. Shivam's treachery at least makes her strong enough to stand for herself. She knows that she can't hide behind Swayam or Rey all the time.It's always not their duty to speak for her. She knows that they would always support her but she has to speak for herself. She can't again go back to old Tani phase.

Taani said,'Ya, Rey, you need something?'

Rey asked Taani,' Ya , I wanted to talk to you about something.

Taani was confused,'Ya, tell me'

Rey said,'I know that you are not very comfortable in discussing the topic. But still, I need to know something. Why, did you pretend to be in a relationship with Shiva. Whatever excuses you gave, I don't believe them to be the whole truth. So, tell me the whole story. '

Taani didn't expect such a direct question but still decided to answer ,' Rey , initially I have dressed up like Kriya, behaved like Kriya just to gain your attention. By making you remember your first love, I have hurt you a lot. I was stupid back then, so I acted foolishly. When all these rumours were posted, I knew that you would be affected a lot again. & as a result it would affect your perfomance in the competition as well. Also, bhai was getting affected too. So, I decided, if my one false statement, will make these gossip mongers mouth shut, I should do that.

Rey said,' But, your false statement affected all of us...specially me. I thought, just because I hurt you, you have taken this wrong decision. I thought , you have mistakenly believed that Shivam is a nice person, which he was definitely not.


Taani said,' Rey it's better, if we forget all those things. My emotions & feelings are not going to create problems for you. So, it's better, if we close this topic once & for all.

With this, she left from there.


Rey in his mind,' I don't know about you , but whatever new feelings, I am developing for you, I don't know whether that is going to create any problem or not.

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago

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