Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete*

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Faruheer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Hahahhaha
Has ha k halat kharab hogai
Shree ki to band baj gai.. :p
Hahahha
Thanx for pm waiting for nxt...

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PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Nooo dont stop..its becoming really interesting..looved it,continue soon 👏 👏

Haha sree was sooo funny 🤣

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Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Awesome update dear...

It was very much interesting...
Shree's blurtings...really funny...
Rathod's description about his experience was so good...

Is Sakshi hiding something...????

So they are going there in daytime...
Hope this time they can sort out something...

Please dont stop this one...
I really love your work...
You are an awesome writter dear...

Cont. soon...

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

awesome updates
lovely
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prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

funny nd nyc update...:-)
shree kicked Rathore nd also.pledng ghost to leave him nd eat Arjun 🤣
bt shakshi aur Arjun k beech mein kis topic pr baat ho rhi thi...in last chap. he vs sayng dat he has drop
a brick nd all 😔

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peppygirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

fantastic update
trust me i coudnt stop giggling while.reading shrees blabbering
arjun sir ko kha jao .and.digest bhi nahi kar pa hoge 🤣

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Asapom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

awesome update

shree's blabering was very funny

continue soon.plss don't stop it

loved this story very much

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Shezi19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Ha ha ha

Lol 👏

Oh god my tummy gonna hurt

I am laughing tooo much

My family think I am mad

What a translation?

Good enjoy the part but I must say that you have to move a bit fast it's look bit slow, try to write more and finished it soon

If you stretch story base is effected

This is my opinion only

But I like your story is full time comedy

Do continue soon

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: prachi90
funny nd nyc update...:-)
shree kicked Rathore nd also.pledng ghost to leave him nd eat Arjun 🤣
bt shakshi aur Arjun k beech mein kis topic pr baat ho rhi thi...in last chap. he vs sayng dat he has drop
a brick nd all 😔

Go through chapter 8 where he had a convo with Sonali & Rathod scolded him...& try to read carefully, there's so many clues throughout the chapters. ...don't concentrate only on the fun sides.

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Rehana25
Ha ha ha
Lol 👏
Oh god my tummy gonna hurt
I am laughing tooo much
My family think I am mad
What a translation?
Good enjoy the part but I must say that you have to move a bit fast it's look bit slow, try to write more and finished it soon
If you stretch story base is effected
This is my opinion only
But I like your story is full time comedy
Do continue soon

Thanks a lot for your honest remarks... I know it's getting stretched. But trust me I'm in a hurry to finish it...I've to finish it before going offline for 6 months or I've to discontinue it.