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Chapter 11

6.00pm , Mehra Mansion.

Shree handover the charge of recording console to Aisha & get ready to enter the mansion with Rathod. Sonali also wanted to go with them but Rathod & Saakshi denied, Arjun also supported them. Therefore, she stayed with Aisha & Chotu near the SUV.

...

In the driveway

Shree was getting restless, which was not unnoticed to Saakshi. She was encouraging him.

Saakshi : Don't worry Shree, nothing gonna happen to you. Just chill.

Shree : Chill is going down my spine already yaar. Yeh Arjun sir ko main hi mila tha bali charhane ke liye?

Saakshi : (looking Shree from head to toe) Haan, he made a bad choice.

Shree : You agree with that !!

Saakshi : Why not? He better select Aisha for this, at least she wouldn't be so afraid before entering the mansion.

Shree : Your calling me a coward??Saakshi, just look at me, I'm injured, I can't run away as quickly as you guys.

Saakshi : Don't worry, Sameer won't left you inside.

Shree : (muttering under his breath) tumhari kya hain, Arjun sir kii saath jaa rahi ho, khuski ke mare aab to kuch aur dikhi vi nahi degi tujhe. Jao, enjoy karo, huh. Yahan hain na bechara chota sa Shree marne ke liye...

Saakshi : I'm listening... Tell me one thing Shree, till morning you & Aisha were teasing me for being afraid of nothing, now what happened? There's nothing inside to scare you, so just relax.

Shree : I hope !!

It was late evening, the sun was setting; the mansion was looking strange in the orange light. All reached at the front door and stopped abruptly.

Rathod : Yeh kya hain, Damm it?

Arjun : (nitting his eyebrows) We ran away without closing the door, right ? then who closed it?

Shree : Maybe air?

Arjun & Rathod pushed the door open and all entered... Shree stopped at the door and was looking around, smelling something.

Rathod : No you want invitation, Shree? Come fast.

Shree: Sir yeh smell...( he approached towards the bolts of the door and touched it ) ...sir it've been oiled !!! Arjun jumped immediately besides Shree, & checked it again.

Arjun : & it is done very recently, maybe today. Come let's go...(he walked inside)

Rathod : We should stick together...

Arjun : No, you go to the main hall, & I'll check the projection room, maybe I meet the blue ghost there...

Rathod : OK, but kahin aur jaane se pehle hum yahan milenge, done?

Arjun : Come, Saakshi.

Rathod & Shree were climbing up the staires & examining the staireways carefully to find any clues. But it was clean.

Rathod : (muttering under his breath)Yeh Rawte vi... hamesha aapna chala hi leta hain...aur main bhi maan ne per majboor ho jati hoon... (toShree) Kuch mila Shree?

Shree : No sir ,its clean.

They entered the main hall, Shree's jaw fell seeing this big room. The lightsof their torch was creating shadowes in the walls, which made them feeling strange...the air inside is cold... hairrising... both were feling awkward, & those photographs of Yatin in different costumes & poses, the abstract paintings were just adding fuel in the fire...

Shree : It looks like a musium !!

Rathod : Right, like some archiological section of musium, old, dusty, faded..lifeless..

"LESS...ESS...SS"

Rathod uttered the last word reaching exactly at the center of the room, that too loud enough...He jumped back.

Shree : Baap re... itni tezz...( he was still at the centre)

"EZZ...ZZ..Z"

Rathod pulled back Shree by his wrist.

Rathod : Don't... If you talk loud standing there... That happens.

Shree gulped...& looked around.His gaze fell on a big painting... A landlord looking very angrily at him. His eyes were so alive... He felt an eye winked at him suddenly !!

Shree : Sir, (he groaned)... that painting... Looking at us!!

Rathod : Which one?

Shree just pointed his hand holding the torch to that painting.

Rathod : Hallucination Shree... Painters painted such portraits willingly, that if you look at it from any direction, you feel it's looking at you.

Shree : But sir...it's not painted eye, it's real...and alive !!

Rathod : (Shook his head ) come, look closer.

Rathod approached towards the painting, Shree hesitated for a few seconds before joining him. Both pointed their torches together on the painting. Rathod was right, those eyes were painted.

Rathod : This is Yatin... he made his own portrait like his ancestors... Shree check this painting properly... Bring that chair (he pointed towards another corner of the room) ... stop, I'm coming with you.

Shree bent down to pick the chair up, but he felt someone pulled his bag by its strap. He looked back ith a start & saw a tall figure in the darknees behind...a scream escaped his throat...& he turned to run...but he couldn't..due to the pull on his bag...& he fell down. At that moment two hands dragged him from that place & a iron torso fell down exactly where he was. Shree looked at that thing... It was an complete armour suit...sticked up against the wall. Strap of his bag stuked between its fingers that caused the sudden pull & it fell down.

Rathod wiped sweats from his forehead.

Rathod : God!! You're heavier than your look!!

Shree : (treambling & breathing heavily) Thank you..sir..

Rathod moved to that suit to check it, Shree joined him...It was heavy, if he didn't pulled Shree, he would be injured badly.

Rathod : It's just an ordinary Armour suit... come, let's move.(he got up)

Shree was about to pick up his torch while its ray fell on something, he picked that up. It was a torch.

Shree: Sir, I've found this...but whose?

Rathod : Keep it safely, may be we can find something from it.

Rathod opened the door to go to the entrance area, but it was another door, which led them to a big room, well decorated with a big dining table.

Shree : It's may be the dining area, look at the table sir, it's huge.

Rathod : Table for around 50 people, it should be big. Shree, where is the kitchen area?

Shree : Downstaires, sir. why?

Rathod : (in microphone) Rawte, where are you?

Arjun : Still in the projection room, why?

Rathod : We're coming...Shree, which door?

Shree asked Aisha for the direction & led Rathod to the door of the kitchen area. It was another stairecase entering the kitchen area...it was dark inside, & a humid smell of air evident to the desertiness of this area. May be they are the first to enter here in last 23 years.

They reached in the kitchen area, check it throughly & headed towads the projection room.

...

At the downstairs

Arjun : Guide me to the projection room , Saakshi.

Saakshi : Well, I think it was in the left...no right... Arjun, I can't. We entered from another side, so..

Arjun : But you ran out through the main door.

Saakshi : I was scared Arjun... main to bas nikalna chahti thi...And found the exit...aab kaise who thori na yaad hai.

Arjun asked Aisha in microphones and headed towards a door. Saakshi silently followed him.

They again entered that theater like room, Arjun silently observed the piano then the pipe organ inside out. Then he pulled down the progection screen, it was quite in a good condition. Everything was neatly arranged & clean, there was no trace of dirt. Then he moved towards the projector, while Rathod contacted him.

Saakshi was keenly observing the film box, and called Arjun.

Saakshi : Arjun, this box... I left it open...and the films are arranged in the order now...

Arjun : So it's confirmed...It is arranged by its woner. Anyways where did you saw that blue shadow?

Saakshi : Near the pipe organ.

Arjun : I've checked there, there's nothing. But we need to inspect this place more precisely...

Saakshi : Do you think you can find some secret doors or something here? Look at this room... it already has many doors.

Arjun : May be one of this lead us to the culprit.Come?

Saakshi : Where ?

Arjun : Stage dekhna hain.

Saakshi again followed Arjun to the stage where the piano & the pipe organ were placed. Arjun climbed up on the stage & approached towards a door behind it. He gestured Saakshi to be at his heels. He slowly opened the door and entered, it was a room full of props, costumes, furnitures & other stuffs.

Saakshi : It's the Prop room...like all other theaters have. But I don't think it's in use...kaafi dirty hain.

Arjun asked her to search the place & start cheching the boxes and almiras...& Saakshi did so from the other side of the room. Suddenly Saakshi turned and and found Arjun standing right behind her. She looked at him quizzically.

Arjun : Was there any problem between you & Jay?

Saakshi still stared at Arjun with same expression in her eyes.

Arjun : Tumne Jay ki dead body nahi dekhi... You were not present in his last rituals...why?

Saakshi : There's nothing like that...we'll talk later about this.

She was about to turn...but..

Arjun : Sorry.

Saakshi : Haan?? Kis khushi main?

Arjun : For yesterday...I dropped a brick ...so...

Saakshi : (whispering) not now (pointing towards the microphones)...

And they both heard the pipe organ started playing. Both froze at their place for a moment.

...

Rathod & Shree were walking through a corridoor leading to the projection room. The darkness around them was taking a toll over them to control their anxiety. Suddenly they heard the pipe organ playing; they looked each other and rushed towards the room.

As they entered, they found the instrument was playing automatically, & no sign of the other two. They froze at the door...and Shree was mentally prepared to run away, but Rathod strated walking towards the pipe organ. Shree, being helpless, followed him.

Rathod stroll around the pipe organ to find how it was playing but he found nothing. Shree also tried to find any device or electric connection of the instruments...he turned to Rathod to say something but his voice stucked inside his throat. Rathod notices the strange expression on Shree's face, & following his graze, he looked back. The sight was enough to frighten him, he took two steps backward and tried to hold Shree, but his hands found only emptiness behind him. And a big sound of banging door succeeded to move his eyes to its direction, he saw Shrees retreating form through the door. His fear as increasing... But he also thinking the whereabouts of Arjun and Saakshi... he couldn't left them here...he tried to call them... but his voice as ceased... he tried to move ...but his leg Seemed as heavy as stones... He was just staring at the blue figure in front of him with bated breath...but he didn't know what really it is...then suddenly his fear turned into apprehension & he ran... ran for his life.

...

Arjun was the first to recover from the shock, he looked at Saakshi & gestured her to keep quite. He moved doorwards, opened it a bit, and looked at the playing pipe organ. Saakshi also joined him.

Arjun : Is it playing the same tune that we heard that day?

Saakshi nodded.

They saw the blue shadow was forming behind Rathod. Saakshi was about to warn Rathod but Arjun stopped her. Saakshi questioned him with eyes & he just pointed towards the shadow. They saw Shree to show Rathod the figure and showing a clear pair of heels at the next instant.

Arjun : Saakshi, did you saw this blue thing that day?

Nobody answered him... he looked at Saaakshi... she grasped his hand tight & was staring at that figure as if she was hypnotyzed. Arjun followed her gaze...he saw nothing that could make any sense...but he felt the temperature was falling as his anxiety increasing...he held Saakshi's hand & moved to Rathod and about to call him, but Rathod ran away like a maniac... & the blue figure passed through him...Arjun had no other option except following his chief.

...

Shree ran like a scared deer, ignoring the sharp pain in his injured foot...he just wanted to get out of that suffocating mansion, but he couldn't find the way out...& that terrorized him more. To add his misery... someone started follow him as he could hear the footsteps of the follower. He increased his pace and finally he saw the opened door and moonlit sky outside through it.

He came out of the mansion and was approaching towards the SUVs, but his foot stucked in some stone and he fell down. his body rolled over the ground for a few meters and then stopped against a pile of stones he tried to get up for many times but his paining foot just gave up...He couldn't bare the pain anymore.

Now he could listen those approaching footsteps towards him...he assumed that blue shadow is coming for him... he closed his eyes & started praying... but the sound was getting closer & he felt something heavy jumped over him.

He was waiting for the worst as no energy was left in his body. He felt the weight shifted and a hand touched his back. It slightly rubbed his back and started moving upward as if it was trying to find his neck. He felt his body was getting numb.

That hand stopped near his nape, and pressed there a bit more. It was the last straw & Shree screamed his heart out.

...

As Arjun ran behind Rathod holding Saakshi's hand...their footsteps just added some fuel in the fire of Rathod's fear. He spinted towards the main door and then to the vehicles...he forgot about all plannings, strategies, work plans..Everything. All he knew was to get in the car and get away from this area. But his fortune was not seemed to be with him... His feet were colloided with some big obstacle and he fell down. He got up quickly and looked at that thing... he touched it to find out what made him fall & heard a heartstopping scream that made him scream too.

Arjun saw two man fell in the ground and crying their heart out... This scene brought him in senses, at the same time he felt a tug in his hand. He looked his sidewards and found Saakshi trying to freeing her hand from his grip.

Saakshi : ( pointing forward) I think they need us.

Arjun nodded and approached towards them not leaving her hand from his grip.

...

How was it?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome, Fab, Superb update...
It was super-duper funny...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣...The characters of this FF are getting scared & I m laughing imaging them...😆😆😆 😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update
it was too funny
all were afraid once again
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣 was actually very funny
just trying to imagine all of them arjun sakshi sam and shree in that situation
pls update the next psrt jaldi se
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Posted: 11 years ago
All i can say is that its just mindblwong and please please continue soon...please please..its getting very interesting by each update and getting us hooked to it 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another very interesting update dear...

So once again they had to come across the same fright...
But this time they managed to succeed to some extent...thats good...

Poor Shree...!!! He was the most feared person...

Cont. soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
another amazing update...case is getting interesting gradually...👏
continue soon... and plz pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahaha
Really enjoyed
I jst start imaging the scene of rathore shree arjun n sakshi at castle...
I jst love it...
Got no pm
Plz pm me the nxt part
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 12

Morning, 9.00am, ETF conference room.

All settled at their respective places, including Sonali. Shree & Rathod was narrating their experience of last night.

Arjun : (leaning on his chair) Ok, the blue shadow hold you by your neck, then?

Shree : (turned red)...then Sir?... you mean after I screamed?

Arjun : Haan... then?

Shree : Aapne to khud hi dekha na sir? Toh...

Arjun shook his head and asked the same question to Rathod.

Rathod : Then I fell down...

Sonali : Ek minute... you fell down over him first , then you get up ...to how you could fell again?

Rathod : (shooting fireballs from his eyes to Shree)...Main gira...utha.. isse touch kia... aur iss bewkoof ne chikhna shuru karr dia, upar se laath maarke mujhe phirse gira dia... maine isse kahan vi ke main hoon...par isnee suna hi nahi... Upar se kuch strange bol raha tha...shayed Bangla tha...

Arjun : Kya bola isne?

Shree : Sir maine kuch nahi bola...I mean... It was nothing..( he didn't wanted to tell anyone what he blabbared in fear).

Arjun : So what? Ek bar hum sab vi sune...bolo.

Shree remained silent.

Aisha : Koi nahi... hum recording sun lete hain... it would me much clearer.

She played the footage...and Shree's red face become dark, while all except the ACP's were staring at him ith a suppressed smile.

Chotu : Shree, teri bakwaas to samajh main nahi aa raha...yeh kaunsa mantra chant karr raha hain tu?

Saakshi : Arre chotu... Wait. ..is mantra ka meaning avi pata chal jayega...Shree tum kya bol rahe tha woh aab clearly bolo. ...in hindi or in english..(Shree remained silent)...agar tum nahi bologe toh bhi hume pata chal hi jayega, soch lo... ( but still Shree was mute)...Sonu?

Sonali : Haan. Shree keh raha hain... (she listened to the recording and starts translating it with it). [recorded lines are in brakets]

( Amake kheyo na baba voot, chere dao) Don't eat me Mr. Ghost, let me go.. ...

( ami asustho choto chele) I'm a weak, little boy..

( amake khete ektuo moja lagbe na) I won't even taste good to you...

(pet kharap hobe) You'll have stomach problem...

( Khete hole Arjun sir ke khao) eat Arjun sir if you really want to...

(kintu hazam korte parbe na bole dilam)... but I'm warning you that you can't digest him...

( Charo pleeezzz...)...

Hearing his pleading scream, Sonali can't control her laughter anymore...She start laughing loudly, and others joined her except Shree and Arjun. One was silent into embarrassment, while another turned around with his chair that no one could see his face.

Rathod was first to control his laughter and observing his team with great amusement... How they find entertainment in this serious work, he looked at Chotu who was about to ROFL, Saakshi, Sonali was just like freshly opened champagne bottles erupting bubbles continuously, and Aisha was shining like a chandelier with millions of lights. He saw his second in command who turned around to hide his expression, he was dam sure his friend was smiling, and finally Shree, who was looking down due to embarrassment.

He decided to rescue his tech expart from the whole team, so he growled loudly.

Rathod : Stop it... we are at work.

All stopped at once but Sonali. She was having a big time to control her laughter, while Saakshi was looking at her friend in relief.

Arjun turned around and Asked Aisha about the torch Shree found in the mansion.

Aisha : We've found fingerprints on it, it was Dayal's.

Arjun : Matlab baki dono ka troch vi mansion main milega... Dead bodies ke pass koi torch nahi tha.

Aisha : Sir they were not killed at the driveway, we didn't find any clue there... the corpses were placed there deliberately. As we found our first clue inside the mansion, we may find more insinde... may be they were killed inside the mansion.

Chotu : But Sir, that mansion is dark inside... No power...& it's difficult to find anything in that darkness... why don't you reconnect the power line?

Rathod : I've talked with the power authority... They'll do it ASAP.

Arjun : Then delay it.

Rathod : Why?

Arjun : I think there is a secret power supply... If we reconnect the main power... we cannot detect it... & evidences bhi tempered ho sakta hain...we cant take the chance.

Rathod : Evidences waise bhi tempered hogaya Rawte... We left the door and we found it closed last night, Saakshi left the film on the floor & the box open but when you both saw it again, it was closed and films were neatly arranged again... all the rooms are clean... I bet we will not find even a fingerprint there.

Shree : Sir but woh kitchen area?

Rathod : Haan that was little strange...Kitchen area was dirty and humid.. as if it was closed for many days.

Aisha : Iska matlab wahan jo koi vi hain woh kitchen area use nahi karta hai...

Chotu : Vooton ka kitchen main kya kaam...woh to kaccha hi sab khate hain na.

Arjun : (irritating ) Haan ...lekin saaf-safayee zaroor karta hain... cheezain sameete hain...darwazain par tel lagata hain... woh sab kuch karta hain jo ek normal insaan karta hain...hain na Chotu?

Chotu : (pouting) but Normal insaan kisiko darata nahi hain... (whispering) aapko chorke.

Arjun : Chotu, tumko jo kaam dia tha...

Chotu : I'm going sir.

He left.

Arjun : Haan Rathod... Shree ne jab tumko laath maarke giraya, phir kya hua?

Rathod : Then you people came...and someone poured water on my head (glaring at Aisha & She looked away)...actually over our head and we found everyone around us...

Saakshi : And all the anxiety, apprehension, fear...whatever... it was gone, right?

Arjun, Rathod & Shree just nodded to her.

Shree : How did you know that?

Arjun : She was also there, with us, remember?

Rathod : Yeh kaise confirm kia Saakshi?

Saakshi : Mera darr to tab hi gayab ho gaya jab maine tom dono ko struggle karte hue dekha, phir dekha Sameer Shree ko hila raha hain, phir dekha Arjun bhi bare maze se in dono ko dekh raha hain. That means tum dono vi normal ho chuke the, aab sirf Shree ko hosh main laana tha, jo Aisha ne kaar dia... I just added 2 & 2.

Shree : Haan... jab Aisha ne mujhe nehlaya tab jaake pata chala main aise hi gala faar raha tha... but that fear was real...I'll never make fun of you in this matter... I promise...Mujhe toh yaad karke hi darr lag raha hain...

Arjun : Ok then... toh we'll go there tomorrow morning...for full inspection... Shree, take rest for today ...

Shree : I'm fine, sir...

Arjun : I haven't finish yet Shree, Sonali ko NC ke ghar drop karo...and appoint some white dressed officer in that area. They'll keep an eye on NC & his peoples activity, and also monitor Sonali's sequrity.

Sonali : I don't need sequrity...

Rathod : & We can't take any chance, unofficial hi sahi...but you are a part of the team now, & we can't take chances with our team members. They're for backup...just in case anything happens.

Arjun : Aisha...

Aisha : Haan sir, I've completed the list of Yatin's close peoples...they're too many...I've issued summons for them, they'll start coming from tomorrow. Saakshi & I will handle them.

Arjun : Ok, Saakshi, come to my cabin in 5 minutes.

He left the conference room.

Sonali : Yeh hamesha aisa hi hain yah koi special occasion hain?

Rathod : Nahi...yeh aisa hi hain.You tell me, how are you?

Sonali : Aaj bohot maza aaya... thanks.

Shree : Do char din raho... aur vi maza aayega...

Sonali : haan haan kyun nahi, aab chalo... we're getting late. Sasha... Tu aaj vi meri yahan rahegi na?

Saakshi : Haan.

Sonali : Then I'll pick you up...on the way to home.

Saakshi nodded positively. Sonali & Shree left, Saakshi also got up to meet Arjun.

...

In Arjun's Cabin

Arjun was looking into the documents Sonali gave them on his laptop. Saakshi knocked & then entered. Arjun gestured her to sit.

Saakshi sat and waited quietly, which is quite unusual for Her and Arjun also.Arjun closed his laptop and found Saakshi engrossed in to her on world.

Arjun : Thinking about yesterday?

Saakshi : haan...nah... why have you called me?

Arjun : I asked something yesterday, about Jay...

Saakshi : Oh..woh ? You know the answer, don't you?

Arjun : I want to hear it from you.

Saakshi : (sighed)...well, funeral avi baaki hani toh...aur meri dekhne ya na dekhne se situation to nahi badlega, hain na?

Arjun : That's not the answer Saakshi... tum dono main kya problem thi jo tum ek baar vi uska ghan nahi gaye... He was your friend, not he?

Saakshi : Yeh information to galat hain ACP... I visited there after his death...just didn't stay for long... Sonali was fainted ...to main usko ghar le gayee...Jay doesn't need me anymore, Arjun, he's dead. And I can't leave Sonali alone, at least I can try my best for her. (smiling) Nahi to mere marne ke baad Jay mujhe nehi chorega. Aur kuch?

Arjun : Ek baat batao, Tum dono aise indifferent kaise behave karr sakti ho? Specially Sonali, I can feel her through and through.. ...I know how it feels when we lose someone...but she ...

Saakshi : seems very normal. We cannot throw our all afflictions off... But we can try to fight or ignore them, right? Les Masquex'Arjun, ek tumne pehna, aur ek humne. That's all.

For the first time Arjun felt he saw some glimps of different emotions in her eyes...but before he could figure it out... Saakshi left his cabin.

...

In SUV, Shree & Sonali were going to Sami's Resident.

Sonali was giggling inwardly... putting her hand on her mouth, while Shree was shooting murderous glances to her.

Shree : Sonali, plz stop it, yaar. It's not funny.

Sonali : Yah...it was..(and just burst into laughter).

Shree : Haan haan... Haso ...aur haso... Mujhe laga tha kit um meri state se ho to meri saath doge... lekin tumne to meri hi utar dii..

Sonali : Aab maine kya kia... sirf tumhari baton ko translate hi to kiya na.

Shree : Kyun, tum to mana vi karr sakti thi...

Sonali : tumhe kya laagta hain? main mana karti to translation nahi hoti? For you kind information Mr. Sen, Saakshi ko bi Bangla aati hain, agar main translate nahi karta toh woh khud hi karr deti...aur main to sharif larki hoon jo word to word translate kia... usne aapni special remarks vi add karti, phir tumhara pura satya naash ho jata.

Shree : Aab jo hua usse zyada aur kya hota? By the way, tum dono kaafi achchi friends ho...

Sonali : She's my first friend after Jay. Duniya kii 2nd inssan hain yeh jisne mere scar se nahi dari...she's always there when I need someone ...like an angel... Hey stop here !!

Shree : (stopped the car) What? Yahan? Kyun?

Sonali got down fron the SUV and walked to his window.

Sonali : Aage dekho (She pointed forward to the entrance of Swami's resident) ... I'll walk...main nahi chahti koi tumhe yahan mere saath dekhe... tum jao aab.

Shree shrugged. But something dropped on the bonnet which made both jumped. It was a white pigeon.

Sonali : Lo kisiko toh khabar ho hi gayee... Main chalti hoon.

Shree called her from back.

Shree : Tum yahan kab tak rukogi?

Sonali : Pata nahi...kyun?

Shree : Zyada time nahi loge... toh I can take you back.

Sonali : Thanks... But you can go, I'll call driver to take me home. See you tomorrow.

Shree sighed and turned the SUV...with a grouch on his face.

...
How was it?

P.S. Responses are decreasing day by day... that means story is becoming boring... Should I stop it here or continue updating?
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Posted: 11 years ago
shree's blabbering in fear...very funny...eat up arjun bt u cant digest😆😆
shree kicked rathod and he fell down.. oh God i cant stop laughing..😆
at last they will visit the mansion in daylight for the first time...lets see what clues they get...
plz dnt stop the story do continue soon...
thanks for the pm...

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Uncharted Roads ~ ZNMD OS [Arjun+Imran🌈] #PyarkaTropefest

Graphic Credits: itsShonali This is one of my entries for the Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest Trope: Set A: Opposites Attract Set B: Road...

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