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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update i always enjoyed ur work
Its awsum asusual...plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update as usual😃


I love my Arnav❤️ Good that he taught Lavanya a lesson😊 And the way he treats Khushi is so cute. He treats her like a doll😳

And in this story Khushi is such a sweet, innocent girl, and I can practically imagine herself bushing under Arnav's gaze & touch every time☺️

Awe, I loved Tibbles as well😆

Thanks for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting for the next chappie

Update soon😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
nice part
maza aayega ab
la got good one
anji and aman
nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my, asking her not to step up on a ladder. ahan. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loving the story so far. Wow. He came to meet her and told Lavanya off. Maddy is cool too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww, he couldn't stay away. And yaay we get the description of what he is wearing as well.. Suave outfit Zara.. 😃


He is so considerate when it comes to her, noticing every tiny emotion or reaction.. Khushi is one lucky girl..


Am glad he told Maddy about La, the girl needs to be shown her place. Arnav bought Aman along as a backup 😆


Aman is really funny though and cute as well, the way he smirked when he understood Arnav's plan of touring the library as an excuse to be alone with Khushi was spot on... And my oh my, Arnav thinking of ways to be around her, planning out things to the last detail just indicates how deeply in love with her he is... 😳


Awww, he kept tabs that she hadn't looked at him even once and hence quickly came up with something to say so that he was finally able to look into her hazel eyes.. The romantic in me ooohhh'd and aaahhd' at this point...


At last comes the part which I am pretty sure he had been dying to ask her, her grandparents' reaction to their date. The gentleman that he is, he offers to come meet them in order to remove any misgivings they might have about him being good for their Khushi... Sigh the actions of a love-struck Arnav..


Tibbles is utterly cute and adorable.. Hey that's unfair, we could have had our first fall-&-catch rabba ve here, but alas it didnt last long.. Pouts... 😒


Loved his possessive nature from thereon. The way he tells her that she is never getting on those ladders again and when she questions his place in her life, the grabbing and pulling was so typical ASR that I sighed and blushed... What was touching and surprising was that he said that "I'm yours". Now why this is astonishing is that considering the tag-line of your FF, I had assumed that he would say the "Your mine" but the fact that he has given himself over to her is just very romantically endearing.. 👏


The whole part about Tibbles observing him was very sweet. I chuckled when I imagined Arnav nose to nose with the cat. And to think the cat licked him! In a way I think Tibbles has just Arnav her approval!


The whole him moving forward and she moving backward made my heart go dhak-dhak... And I was reminded of the show wherein we witnessed such magic... Thank you for that scene Zara... Also the ambiance at that moment was beautifully described, secluded in a lone corner of the library, surrounded by old books, the smell of paper in the air, the sunlight pouring in, in rays, the beautiful play of light and shadow all combined to make this beautiful. ☺️


Ah the anticipated coffee meet with NK makes it mention. Hmmm, I wanna see how Arnav reacts to that. She wants him to drop her off the next day, so darn cute..


Amazing update dear, cannot wait to read more...
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Zara

Love the update

Awiee both ArShi are feeling so strong for each other

That Lavanya

Maddy serve her right

Waana read more

So do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
U r a superb writer...
That was plain awesome😊



Waiting for their next date...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
wen u goona update next?...wen will arnav drop off khushi to her place?
waiting waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cannot wait for the next update

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