Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Nice rescue...Arnav and Khushi are safe for now. Arnav found a nice spot :-)... perfect and cozy for 2 people in love. Very nice update.

You know, I knew you do not update on Sundays. Even then I checked at least 5 times to see whether you have updated yesterday :-).

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

ok that was amazing ..love love love it..love this arnav..finally one story where he is the hero!!! and smita, u r a fantastic writer.

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shruti

@shruti46

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

finally he saved khushi..

end of shyam is nearing.

seriusly arnav never misses the chance to romance..

the cow description was so funny...

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@SarunArshiIpk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

It was sooo awesome , arnav is so cute, bechari khushi, wat al arnav does o her, waiting eagerly fr next update

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hadiqua

@adrastiathena

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Now thats wat I call an update...loved the finishing para...

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Oh my my!!!

ASR in romantic mood...

Totally loved the update!!!! Arnav and Khushi squeezing into the small space

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

Can't stop blushing khushi is now gone cnt wait when arshi expose shyam

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Amazing and superb update, written perfectly from start to finish.

So glad Arnav and Khushi have managed to escape and are safe.

Wow loved the part where they were alone in the hut, poor Khushi could not even move.

Loving the seducing and teasing behaviour of Arnav's it was fantastic.

So glad Khushi mentioned she kept a copy of the will, hopefully shyam's game will be up in the next update.

Can't wait to read shyam's reaction when he realises that he has been played along with.

Loved the update, awesome writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Amazing update... Loving the pattern Arnav is following so that Shyam will be tricked.. And Im loving the closeness between ArHi..

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Great great update Smita!

Khushi has told Arnav about the papers and that she had them photocopied. I'm so happy that Khushi here is so sensible. The idea of getting photocopies is such a brainwave!

I was fearing that they may not be able to escape unscathed and my breath hitched when I read that their car stopped!
But thankfully, they were able to escape!

Loved your description of the loft where they hid. I could imagine the whole scene. ArHi trying to adjust in that little place..
And Arnav is such a tease! He's so quick 😆 but he had to control. The little loft isn't the right place 😛 😆

I hope the kidnappers are caught soon! For how long, and where, would ArHi hide!
I can't wait to read Shyam's reaction to Khushi's escape! :D

Loved it! :)
Thanks for the email Rashmi! :)