Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

That was fantastic. I am so glad that they told each other everything. What to say about Mr. Raizada now? Even in this situation he is busy seducing his innocent wife who has no clue that he now believes her. He didn't even bother to apologize or confess his love for her I can't wait to find out what you have planned for them. Awesome chapter 😃

Edited by RizArshi - 12 years ago

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

UnRes...

I am here...

With My Monkey Sena..

& i am second...

Smita Di..Your updatewa..has made my GM..switch On...after a long time..

Arnav hunched over and crawled to Khushi.

There was just enough space for one person to lie down in the centre and escape detection, two, if they squeezed close.

They lay in silence, each absorbing the feel of the other, the warmth, the scent, the softness and the hardness, both of them relieved beyond words that they were alive and together.

"Arnavji, I made two copies of the papers that Shyamji gave me." she confessed.

There was no space to turn away. Khushi looked away.

"Why are you breathing so fast?" he asked softly. Iss Devil ko kya naam du..

Slowly, he lowered his head and rained kisses on her face, his lips tasting the softness of her skin, the sweet nectar of her lips, the delectable lobes of her ears, the pulse at the base of her throat...

Rashmi Di... My monkeys dedicated to you...

Loved you interpretation...and quotewa is awesome.Chota..but badi baat kehne wala...

"I am a slow walker, but I never walk back"

~ Abraham Lincoln

Cya for now...

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 12 years ago

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

Sunday toh aaj khatam ho gaya na😕

Sorry darlings, I meant Monday!

Oo kaa he, hum ArHi mein itni magan rehti hoon ki samay ka pata hi naahi chalti...Sorry!😭

Will post by today noon. Sabar karo. Sabar ka phal hamesha hot hota he...ha..ha..😉

Smita

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Hehe i knw ure update will be as usual awesome😆

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Just read the three updates together nice concept loved it.

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Meenu Res Herewa😳😡

Sorry for late res Smita ji

Loved the update

Liked the way you showed Arnav taking their relationship to next step

he is now opening up and its really good

and PERFECT INTERPRETATION RASHMIJI

Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 12 years ago

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: smitar

Sorry darlings, I meant Monday!

Oo kaa he, hum ArHi mein itni magan rehti hoon ki samay ka pata hi naahi chalti...Sorry!😭

Will post by today noon. Sabar karo. Sabar ka phal hamesha hot hota he...ha..ha..😉

Smita

Koi nahi Smitha Ji... it happens when it comes to ArShi.

Will wait for Update like Nalla Ponnu(GOOD GIRL)😳😆

Rashmi ji.. Sorry.. I forgot to comment on your Interpretation..

I loved it.. very well interpret🤗

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radhika007

@radhika007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Love it waiting for the next chapter

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Arshipriya16

@Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Haan di sachme sulgti update thi ejdam hot itani ki muze barish men bhigna pada khudko thanda karne ke liye.Awesome update now waiting for Shyam to go in jail.And Arhi in RM.Ab zxada hot mat karna warna cottagewa mein aag lag javegi.Bechare jaanwar bhi hai usme.Can we get another update till night?

Edited by Arshipriya16 - 12 years ago