Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: deepa.e
Hey smitty sweety!!
A very fantastic start!!!!
Super and cool and perfect start!!
I have a suggestion, if u want to know then will scrap u!!
Nothing about this ff!! something just normal!!
Also this start is really heart wrenching and emotional!!
I loved kushi thinking and shyam is stuck there which is a good sign!!
I dont want arnav to be kidnapped in this FF and one more thing is i really want him to be sensible and atleast try understanding whatever kushi wanted to tell to him!!
Pls pls!!
Rashmi Di
Awesome and briliance update!!
No doubt :D :D :D
Smitty pls cont soon!!

Sure! Just PM me!

Smita

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

I am so glad you started a story again. This will be a good journey

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

ahhh saving khushi indeed

but will he be able to save her

or will she do the saving once again

hmmm at least she had more sense here

of course she would do

she aint stupid you know

and like she said she would rather go to arnie than shyam

no matter what he says or feels about her

arnie still is more relaible source

and thank god for her family keeping him back

if only she gets to him

the rest who cares what he thinks of her

and arnie how can she be what she was after your revelation mate

you know it too deep down that she is innocent

that she cant be with shyam too

think if she was would she have sacrificed herself for her sister

if she was guilty wouldnt she have told your family and hers of the whole contract marriage

she may be naive but she certainly aint stupid

even if he believes her or not he has to get rid of creep for sure

hope she gets this file to him

rest can be thought about later

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awsommmiiieee new story...well intrsting intrsting guess instead of arnav khushi wud get kidnapd here lolz..:p aisa ho gaya na arnav myt turn mad letz c whtz nxt update sooon!!! How n 4m wht khushi is gonna b need 2 b savd 4m dat creeps creepy plan

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Wow...a new fanfic.
Have been waiting for it
Part one was very interesting.
Continue soon

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Gim

@SansShyam

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Its a wonder how much we are fascinated with Arnav's soft side.All of your stories have a melted Arnav and I loved reading all of them..Keep up the good work...Once I come back from work,this is a stress buster...😳😳