Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

you got knack of picking a good point and build a beautiful story...

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Prerna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

congrats on the new story
and great start
liked it

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Sujata77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

finally. i was waiting eagerly. great chapter as always.

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nihasan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Superb yaar
wow another intrstng plot
gona njoy diz tooo

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

One more gem from Smita..loving it

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Amazing start

Loved it

Cant wait to read more

Fab interpretation Rashmi

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

First of all, I am loving the title of the story. I hope it is what we all are expecting i.e. Khushi being in trouble and Arnav saving her. I have always LOVED an Arnav who is in pain because of Khushi's pain...I LOVE to see a vulnerable scared Arnav for Khushi!

Secondly, I am looking forward to see your take on the pre-kidnapping track. This is what was expected of Khushi i.e. to not blindly trust a crook. Hope Arnav does some soul-searching and himself comes to the conclusion that Khushi is not party to the sins committed by Shyam.

Lastly, as much as I LOVE and AWAIT for your updates, I do want to make one suggestion i.e. a story that is different from the IPK track a bit just like His Smiling Girl and Keeping Khushi where the characters were the same with a different take on their story...(just a suggestion) 😳

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sarozz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Wow I'm completely over the top...enjoying and excited for the story as it unravels...the title itself gives away a lot of meaning...hope it's arnav who saves her from that snake and his bad intentions...hope arnav believes her and makes everything alright...waiting for more...thanx for the mail...