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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome maha update and what a cliffhanger. Arnav assumed that she doesn't love him based on her reaction... OMG...Now would he go back to his original shell, and start ignoring her again, since he doesn't want to get affected by her.. or does he think that she might go back to NK as he heard from Aman...Or is he going to decide to pursue her and make her realize his feelings... Curiously waiting for the next update to see how you would be penning this down..but we have to wait for 10 day... too long...
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Posted: 11 years ago
what can i say about this mahaupdate?
it was simply amaaazing!!!
loved it when he asked khushi to live her life as she wanted
so he tried drinking for the 1st time.
i wonder what is the real name of the drink khushi drank
and then the game. i throughly enjoyed that
i also was surprised when khushi's gutter mind didn't work. i think it is activating only if she was alone with arnav 😆
khushi didn't want to embarrase akash payal
but akash did when it was his turn to ask
seriously he was hell bent on embarrasing khushi and arnav so that they will come closer
and it worked. they did come closer
khushi answered very well for the first question. she would have said all the thing that came to her mind at their passionate kiss if arnav didnt stop her. he was very embarrassed
then the 2nd question. khushi said arnav was the best business man but worst lover. and they got them into a silly fight
and then the 3rd one. arnav tried to stop her. but the damage was done. akash is soo gutterminded 🤣
the the 4th one. loved the answer khushi gave. arnav is perfect for her just like he is
and then the last question. khushi knows arnav very well. she knows that his biggest fear is losing her. and arnav was amazed at khushi as she knows him very well
and then the date of mr. and mrs. raizada. liked that very much
and then it was akashs turn to get embarrassed. tit for tat 🤣 🤣
then it was arnav's turn to answer
khushi was eager to know his answers. especially the 2nd and 4th one
and she got really mad when he said none to the last question

'Fifth question, Do you guys
want one man army, tennis doubles,
or cricket team
None, Zero.
Kyun?
because I dont want kids.
But why?
Khushi, shall we discuss this later.
No, but I love kids. Mujhe ek nahi,
teen teen chahiye. '

arnav was really embarrased and khushi didnt realized whay she is saying. she came back to sense from akashs ' Waise Khushi, teen teen matlab, you want 3 or 3+3 or 3*3?' 🤣 🤣

and then she ran away and came back with a wooden ladle and chased akash all around the house
then khushi fell asleep and arnav carried khushi to his room and by an accident khushi kissed arnav on his lips in her sleepy state. and arnav was shocked
khushi became mad at arnav after she learnt the real reason he took her to his room. she was hurt
and then arnav planned a surprise for khushi. he gave instructions to aman. but he mistook it and decorated arnav's room instead of the porch
and then they had dinner and arnav took her to his room and gifted a dress and asked to wear it
he was completely lost in her beauty that he didnt realized it when he took her to his bed
and then he misunderstood khushi's behaviour and left her
i can see a confession coming soon
loved the precap. will be waiting for you to return

p.s. sorry for commenting late. i wanted to post my 5000th post on your story. now i am an I-F rockerz 😃
Edited by AnupamaJY - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dear superb update.
Starting from the game till arnav surprise part it was simply amazing.

I loved the game part especially khushi innocence. She just answering it without much thinking what they actually asking.

After that their small cute fight. Ya one more thing before that bathroom scene.
End part when arnav take her to the bed and about to kiss her but khushi turned her head and he misunderstood it.
I think next part will be confession part.
Eagerly waiting for next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis is my second round of cooment 4 THINGS i missed mentioning in d previous comment...

Firstly, Nishu U R LUCKY GAL... I ENVY U... VM 4 u????? Hayeee mera no kab aayega????

Cumng back 4m BARUNLAND... DI, Plzzz dnt mind bt i really got so engrossed in d VM tht i dnt realised wen it got over... His eyes always make me weak 2 thnk ryt n wrng...Plus, d song was cherry on top... Awesum 👏 👏 👏

Raizada's on DATE... I'm so lukng 4wrd 2 it...

I luvd Khushi's eagerness 2 hear Praise 4 her 4m his mouth... She really wntd 2 knw wat turns him on... U shud ask him privately Khushi, he wnt mind telling u or rather exploring dem in u... 😉 😆

THANK U DI 4 listening 2 my pleads n let dem share a room... 🤗

First peck on lips... Arnav mst hv een a gone case 4 sure... though I really wanna knw where did he slept last nyt... 😉

Khushi SNORES??? Seriously??? 😲

I luvd d way he dsnt let Khushi stay alone at home... 😃

HAND SPA??? Mujhe bhi chahiye... 😕

Moonlight ambience created??? I ws expecting 1 more KISS... 😳

Decorated bed made my gutter rain ran a mile but was disappointed tht nthng of tht sort hpnd...

Though it ws justified... He needs 2 confess first...

Bt Di, jaldi se ye MU clear karwao...

U knw hw much I luv ur updates, dnt u??? 😉




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Posted: 11 years ago
I am not able to view the VM😡😡

koi toh help karo hamari😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

I am not able to view the VM😡😡


koi toh help karo hamari😭


y meenu..youtube is blocked there???
wasay she has added dailymotion link too,have u tried that also???
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh


y meenu..youtube is blocked there???


i dono... it shows PRIVATE... and then player crashed.. i cant view it😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh ok...trydailymotion link menu...mayb it works...wasay vm is from almost suhagraat scene where the song was tumhin deekho na...but deep has used osaiyan wala song there ...it looks awesome...thats the written update of the vm for u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy


i dono... it shows PRIVATE... and then player crashed.. i cant view it😭😭

di par mere se chal raha,i have just seen it nd again going to see it
deeps di its vry vry vry vry beautiful😳😳,loved it ,❤️superb👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

oh ok...trydailymotion link menu...mayb it works...wasay vm is from almost suhagraat scene where the song was tumhin deekho na...but deep has used osaiyan wala song there ...it looks awesome...thats the written update of the vm for u :)


pata nahi rosy.. yeh sab sirf hamare sath hota hai😭

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