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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awesome update poor kria
swayam chila diya vuspe
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
amazing update.
poor kriya baby šŸ˜†
swayam shouted on her
kitna bura laga hoga usko..

PS. please update soon
and long updates do na šŸ¤”

thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
amazing update...
loved it...
specially swaron's fight...

thnks for the pm..
pls update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Haw phele toh 2 months ke baad update n dat itna chotu not happening

Awesome

U hav dis Amazing story

so plz update lenght buht kam hai

Update Soon :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
nyc update...
awww i love kriyam bond...
swayam is protective...
loved it...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
sorry first for the late comment... the chapter 2 was care and good...
the way his bff swayan care for kria and as she does not take thing serious and
some time have to talk and clear the mu... and the gang told him right that he
is over react and thus looks towards his friend kriya for answers...
do continue soon and pm me ... and yes i have changed my email id
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nycc... bt itna chotu di... :'(

and last scene was soo awsum
HAAN NAHI..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
recap:-sw turn towards kria n ask her "kya me over react kar raha hu kria????? Sach sach batao"
Part :-3
kria:-(selftalk=over react nahi tum to saas bahu serial ki bahu ko bhi piche chod diya.. N me jooth bhi nahi bol sakti...hey universji kis sankat(musibat) me daal diya apne mujhe ab me apne is pyare bff ko kese bolu ki wo over react kar raha he...agar mene asa bola to wo sad ho jayga n me use sad nahi dekha sakti wo bhi meri wajha Se to bilkul bhi nahi...plz univerji help kardo...plz...)
sw kria ko apne self talk se bahar nikalta he
sw:-"kaha kho gai kria bolo na..."
kria:-"mai...wo...sw...tum..."
sw:-" bolo kria"
just than kria look at sharon n hurriedly speak
kria:-"wo...sharon!!!!!!!sharon tumhe bolegi..."sab sharon ki tarf dekhane lagte he.
sh in mind (kria ki bachhi khud ko bachane ke liye tune meri bali chadhadi ...dekhana ek din badla zarur lungi me tujse. ye mera vada he..."
Kr was looking here n there as she know what is going in sh's mind
****earth calling earth calling sharon****
ri:-"kaha kho gayi sharon sw tumse kuch puch raha he."
sh:- looking towards kria "kahi nahi " n sw taking deep sigh " ha tum over react kar rahe ho."
sw looking at sh in shock n than he said " thik he"
whole gang open their mouth in O shape than
kria said wth Pout "wah sw wah dekhali teri dosti n began singa song dost dost na raha pyaar pyaar na raha."
sw:"chup beth notanki"
kr:"notanki me notanki kar rahi hu agar sharon ne jo kaha wo mene kaha hota to tum mujpe toot padte par sh ne kaha To bilkul shaant jese ki usne most obvious baat ki ho... huh!!!"
here sh start blusing
continu to next post...
Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Continue... sw:-"ha to tumhe kya n chup beth tu sh jooth nahi bolti isliye mene asa behave kiya samji na..." kr:-"haha samaj gayi q guys?" N all start laughing hard making sh blush hard n sw was just looking outside to stop his blush kr chupke se to sw:-"keh q nahi deta use apne dil ki baat?" sw become tense n said "what?kis baare e baat kar rahi he tu?" kr:-"jyaada ban mat tu samjana...mujhe sab pata he." sw:-"n tujhe kya pata he?" kr:-"yahi ki tumhara ye dil dhadakta sharon sharon Kehta he"(sorry ye dilaogue copy kiya mene but i love this dialogue) sw:-"shhh koi sun lega toh..." kr:-"toh...toh kya ??atleast isi bahane tum apni feelings confess to karoge...pata nahi q tu apni feelings use nahi bolte jab ki tujhe paat he ki wo bhi tere liye same feel karti he." sw:-"tumhe ye..." kria cut him kr:-"sab ko pata he buddhu ab ye bata ki confess kab karega?? ya fir ye bhi mujhe hi karna hoga" sw:-"asa kuch nahi he samjina tu" kr:-"ohhh really????" sw:-"ya really" vishakha:-"guys hum sab yaha baat kar rahe he nTum dono kya baat kar rahe ho ?hame bhi batao" kr:-"kuch nahi bas asehi" eying sh here sh was confusedn sw:-"ha kuch Nahi " like this they reach their coll with lots of masti n teasing. ********* next day in college our gang was sitting in canteen n having lots of fun when achanaks e they start talking about love,bf,gf,perfect match etc..stuff when all are giving their opinion on this topic si:-"boys ke liye gf sirf time pass hoti he" ni:-"n tum girls ke liye boys cooly hote he right??!! shoppig me saath le jake begs uth wati he?" si:-"ohhh plz...keep ur mouth shut.tumse kisine nahi pucha" ba:-"mujhe ye lafda hi samaj nahi aata gf bf ka.." vish:-"seriously kon padega is faltu ki cheezo me" si:-"sharon tu he kya lagta he???"
Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Hope length will be fine
n sory meri exams chalu thi thats whu cnt updte it
hope u will like it
plz like n do comment

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