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Purplevalley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thats reall nice starting
bt short one

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Aanchal singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

it was amazing but chotu

par exams hain toh chod rahi hun next time bada update chahiye

update soon

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Anjori

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome Update ...

n koi nahi .. we'l wait ... :)

All The Best for ur exams ... :)

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Princess_Devil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nyc update..

but chota tha, its ok i understand exams...

all d best dear...

thnx fr d pm...

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sanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice concept. . N nyc part. .
Do update soon

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jasleen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

hey
nyc concept and idea
really enjoyed
all the best for exams
and
update soon next part
and
plzzz lamba wala

jasleen

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Riya Kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Di... Itz nyc for first try bs thoda mujpe reham krke updt ki length bda dna n all d bst for ur exams

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Kanchi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Its superb
Luvd it...
Bt bahut chota tha...
Nxt want lamba update
Will be waiting 4 ur update

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ArYa/Ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

HAYEE diii bus itnaa chotu saaa... uaaan meraa kyaa hogaa itne se

plzzz next tym zaaada lambaa plzzz plzzz abhi tak to bahut mast laging..

aap plzzz updatee sssooon...

mere bhi examsss goingg on so short comment...

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kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Part 2
As soon as kria was about to fall n pair of hand pull her towards him
n if as kria know who the person is n what is going to happen next
she turned towards the person and just give a small smile to the person who has save her.
But the person is not in mood to any of her this stupid acts and just shout on her
"what the hell!!!!!ye kya tha kria ?agar kuch ho jata tumhe to?Cant u be lil careful?what if u got hurt?
Here our kria was just giving him stupid smile n she said "i m totally fine swayum"
yes the person is none other than our very own swayum.
****flaseback****
swayum was sleeping beside kria
just before driver had applied break he woke up
n jab driver ne break lagaya to swayum ne turant kria ko girne se bacha liya.
****flaseback end****
kria ki baat sunkar swayum aur bhi angry ho gaya
sw:-"fine!!!! Right fine...agar mene tumhe pakda na hota to kya hota do u even know????"
sw ka chilana sunkar sabhi uth gaye n was watching kriyam
kria see towards the gang n do ishara n ask for Help.
Nil:-"dud chill!!!!!kuch nahi hua use...she is alright."
vicky:-"ya dud,she is perfectly fine kuch nahi hua use ...tu itni choti si baat ka pahad q bana raha he?"
sw:-"guys do u even know..."
sharon cut him in between
sh:-"humne tum dono ki baate sunli "
sw:-"phir bhi tum sab mujhe chill karne ko bol rahe ho "
sh:-"sw tum over react q kar rahe ho"
sw:-"me over react kar raha hu??????me???????" (asking to gang)
all in unison (excluding sharon n kria) ""haan""
sw:-"nahi"
all:-"haan"
sw:-"nahi"
all:-"haan"
sw:-"nahi"
all:-"haan"
sw:-"nahi"
all:-"haan"
sw turn towards kria n ask her "kya me over react kar raha hu kria????? Sach sach batao"
bas aaj ke liye baaki next time

Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago