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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Hello you awesome folks,

Had some free time in my hand! So have put up the intro of Lutt Jaawaa! Have a look and leave a review:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3916418/ss-by-kalpana-lutt-jaawaa-complete

The first chapter will be posted tonight!

Take care and enjoy

Kalpana

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

LUTT JAAWAA

Short Name : LJ

Pairing : Maan-Geet

Genre : Romance, Drama, Action

Summary : A Love Story inspired by the Vidyut Jamwal Movie Commando!

Status : Complete!

Parts : 9

Link : Lutt Jaawaa!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Waah kya baat hai

Can't wait for first chappy now

Gonna check out the movie you mentioned though

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: chavvi16
Waah kya baat hai
Can't wait for first chappy now
Gonna check out the movie you mentioned though

Don't check out the movie! Please let the suspense be there! But still if you are planning to watch it, do watch it coz it has awesome action scenes! I just those scenes! Vidyut Jamwal definitely got a fan in me with those moves! And his dance moves - simply superb! On youtube search the song Lutt Jaawaa from this movie, simply awesome choreography. Main toh fida hun is gaane ke dance steps pe!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Hey guys,

Typed like a maniac and wrote another 1000 words of DFL! Finally MG came face to face. Writing their dialogues was truly fun! You will love it!

Another news is that LT's first chapter has been edited. But I will put it up at night as at that time no one will disturb me!

Now to the most important announcement of today! I might update DFL tonight. But please note that I said "might". No confirmation! OK? You see Chapter 64 had to be divided because I am trying to put too many scenes in one chappy. Already I have written more than 5000 words in it. Better divide it now and put it up! So, Chapter 64 (A) might be put up today. MIGHT!!! But if I did that please note that it will have only MG scenes, no ARHI in it. ARHI confrontation will be in next update.

Take care and wait for the night,

Kalpana

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Don't check out the movie! Please let the suspense be there! But still if you are planning to watch it, do watch it coz it has awesome action scenes! I just those scenes! Vidyut Jamwal definitely got a fan in me with those moves! And his dance moves - simply superb! On youtube search the song Lutt Jaawaa from this movie, simply awesome choreography. Main toh fida hun is gaane ke dance steps pe!

Not gonna watch the movie

But check out synopsis

Then changed me mind

Will check your story only

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Will wait

Like said don't mind if you divide it into two

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Hey Guys,

I have updated both Lutt Jaawaa and DFL! Here are the links:

Link to LT:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3916418/ss-by-kalpana-lutt-jaawaa-complete?pn=6

Link to DFL:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101161916

Thank you and enjoy

Kalpana

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

wow loved lutt jawan

and working towards DFL now

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Hello people,

Today your friend here is in a rambling mood. So I am going to ramble. If you are not interested in my ramblings, frankly speaking, I don't care! Coz this is my thread!😉😆 Main jo chaahe karoon!

But jokes apart, for days I wanted to ramble about what I think about my chapters but I did not know where or to whom should I ramble coz I have got no one here (in Boisar) who has read even one word of my stories. So I remained quiet. But today I thought, why not ramble in this thread? Kaun idhar mere ko rokega?😆 So here is what I think of the chapters I posted yesterday. (I will try to keep my ramblings short but no promise)

This is something I will try to do after every update. Not only you get to read my view points, if you are free, you can reply and place your view points too. And then who knows we can even have a good discussion about my stories. Unlike PMs, this can be available to every reader toh sabka time pass bhi hoga till I update!

So here are my thoughts for my yesterday's update. First up, I will talk about Lutt Jaawaa Chapter 1. I am just loving the response I have got for the first chappy! I cannot believe how many people are excited to know more about who this Khurana heir is! And I am loving the suspense it is providing to you all. It will be revealed in chapter 2 or 3. Uske aage main kuch nahi bolungi! When I edited the chappy, I carefully went through the chappy more than 3 times, to make sure that the suspense is still intact. Loved the response and thanks a lot for that!

I am really happy with the way the chapter came out. It was crisp, precise and to the point. It does not ramble like DFL or KZ. It is to the point. I totally loved that and wished I could write DFL the same away but I just drift away when I write DFL. This was awesome. I never factored the thrill quotient while writing it but while reading it I realized that my story also has thrill in it. Never had I thought I would write it so beautifully. Till now I used to think that DFL is my best work till date but today I think LT might take over the position. What do you think?

About Chapter 64(A) of DFL, I will ramble in next post! Ek post ke liye itna kaafi hai nahi?😉

Kalpana